I Am the Savior, After All

Hello everyone, I am the author. This is my first novel in my life. From the characters to the plot, I came up with it bit by bit. There may be many shortcomings, but I will write it down seriously. If Taijia doesn't feel good, you can write it and I will change it. You can tell me what plot you think of, and I may choose a small part. Text fragment: He stood up, walked to the window, and looked at the dark sky outside, his back showing unspeakable forbearance. "But I want to remind you that the path you have chosen is not easy at all." "You hold life in your hand and can awaken the withered life, but you have to bear the expectations of countless people and the sacrifices that follow. You will see separation and despair, and you will be forced to make countless dilemmas." Pei Sushi turned around and looked at Xing Wangcheng with his strange eyes: "The world will look up to you and force you. You can choose to carry everything, or you can choose to leave. But once you set foot on this road, there is no room to look back." "The savior is a consumable"

It's tied so far, and I feel pretty good. Although he's a new author, his writing doesn't seem to be as bad as I thought (?) The writing is pretty good, but is this book purely handwritten (?) When I first read it, I always typed "he" and "she" wrong, which affected the perception a bit, because I didn't know much about the characters at the beginning (I was confused when I was reading it, and I thought I had remembered the wrong gender, so I turned back to the front to read it) The plot is also okay, although it is also very common like the academy competition. In terms of character creation, I can only say that it is quite satisfactory (maybe it is because the content is relatively small and has not been reflected yet?) And it feels that the attitude of the protagonist group towards Xing has changed a bit quickly, which is a bit strange🤔 (Maybe it is because they have become teammates, so they are not so defensive?) The above is only my personal evaluation of this book. Everyone has different opinions. If you feel differently/evaluate differently, please do not attack me (I am still very interested in this book and will continue to follow it)

Thank you for your hard work, teacher! I have no regrets about eating such a delicious meal🥺❤️❤️I was able to eat such a delicious meal just like that, even three Michelin stars are nothing more than that🉑🉑🉑, it's so beautiful🥺Men are menstruating when they look at it🙄Women are nervous when they look at it💪This is a picture of depression 's nemesis 😎 is the alarm clock for vegetative people 😭 so cute that tears flowed out of the corners of the mouth and flooded into the Qiantang River 😱 So handsome 😘 God is my rose, it illuminates my dark life and makes my world map meaningful 😊 I ran, I jumped, I jumped on the balcony of the 0th floor Tango 😮 made me realize that God does exist. I was so cute that I couldn't stop crying. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water. The nemesis of depression 😋 is an alarm clock for vegetative people 😨 is so cute that it floods into the Qiantang River. It sounds so good 🥰 It's God who is my rose and illuminates my dark life. It made my world meaningful 😙 I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor, which made me realize that God does exist. I cried when I heard that I was so good. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water (PS: Xing Wangcheng is a cute little cake!)

I can tell it's a newbie, and the writing is pretty good. I've only read five chapters so far, so I'll mention any issues I see. First, there are a lot of nonsense plots, such as those paragraphs about talking to the system. The problem is that there is no information and no plot, it is just chatter. So how do you check to see if what you write is nonsense? It just depends on whether there is any information and whether the plot can still be connected if this sentence is deleted. Try to avoid nonsense when writing. : Of course, this is not a denial or suppression of you, it is just a suggestion I gave. Since I have not finished watching the plot, I will not comment blindly. Looking back, I felt a strong sense of AI. I don't know if it's a matter of polishing or learning AI writing skills. I don't know the whole story, so I won't say anything rashly. A reminder for newcomers: use AI less for polishing, writing, etc. It is very unfriendly to the growth of newcomers. : Recently, various websites are cracking down on AI. If you just want to generate electricity for love and just want to write your own novels, and don't care about making money, then use it sparingly. AI can only play an auxiliary role, looking up information, naming, etc.

If nothing else, I really like this setting.

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It looks good. I want to watch Star Wars.