I Fell into a Short-Form Drama World, and If You Don't Want It, I'll Take It

The plot changes too fast. You can control the rhythm a little. There is nothing wrong with the essentially cool writing. I'm afraid that you won't be able to write for a long time without any content 🤦. And add some flesh and blood appropriately to make the story more interesting. So far, every plot of yours is just a skeleton and a bit dry. Come on, little author, and update more. Moreover, the male protagonist's character needs to be enriched, just like a 2b boss 🤦

It's okay, but there are some caveats. Moreover, AI tastes heavy... Many descriptions are too human-like, and those with some emotion are like the cold protagonists of ancient times. The male protagonist always sneers, taps his fingers on the table, leans forward, has a harsh voice, sneers, and a mocking smile... These 115 There is also a catch in the comment section. Why are the ambiguous physical contacts between Li Qingya and Ye Chen written so richly and carefully? Why does this standard lightning point appear? Because AI doesn't understand it, I suggest you finish it and revise it carefully by yourself...🤦

This book feels pretty good when I look at the table of contents. I hope the male protagonist won't be made into a green-haired turtle.

Come on, but I hope there can be more sweet stories. Don't write too much about the NC heroine. Just the author himself, Akaashi, can give us something good. She is indeed a bit of a tauren. That brother is right. Even if they were not together at the time, there is no need to accept this kind of woman.

Chapter 115, 6.9 Rating, multiple female protagonists, Chapter 6 golden finger is here. There is a great fusion of short dramas, and now there is a live broadcast, and the original protagonist has been offline. Skills: Top business thinking Multiple heroines: Liu Ruyan (Chapter 18 Charging) Xiao Mei (Chapter 52 Charging) Li Shiya (Chapter 64 Charging) Qiao Siyi (Chapter 87 Charging) Li Lizhi (Chapter 113 Charging) 135 chapters, 8.1 Rating Xu Miaoyun (Chapter 132 Charging)

Very good, keep writing this way. There are no ridiculous plot settings, and the male protagonist is sensible enough and not ridiculous. Unlike other protagonists in pseudo-human novels who say they are kings in their hearts but act like turtles and make people sick. This type of novel creates a successful male protagonist, is not disgusting, and is worth reading. The heroine is also very good. After returning to her sanity, she is not offensive.

I gave it five stars because I was afraid of being blocked. The first dozen or so chapters of the AI ​​article were changed, but almost none of the later chapters were changed. Except for a temporary look at the article, there was nothing else. The villain-protagonist who was just killed appears again after only a dozen chapters with the same name and other identities.

Personally, I think it's okay. I hope there won't be a heroine who has been chiseled. I also need to adjust the character. The male protagonist has gained some kind of business proficiency and is a bit like a domineering president. He rubs the middle of his nose and is irritable.

The writing is okay. The subject matter is very novel. At the beginning, you have to defeat the boss Liu Ruyan. It's not the eunuch pulling the text.

It's okay, but I suddenly feel that a single female protagonist is pretty good. With so many female protagonists, I feel like there's no point in saving them. It's just a personal feeling.