Enter the World of Short Drama, Don't Let Me Pick It Up

It's okay, but I suddenly feel that a single female protagonist is pretty good. With so many female protagonists, I feel like there's no point in saving them. It's just a personal feeling.

The plot changes too fast. You can control the rhythm a little. There is nothing wrong with the essentially cool writing. I'm afraid that you won't be able to write for a long time without any content [face covering]. And add some flesh and blood appropriately to make the story more interesting. So far, every plot of yours is just a skeleton and a bit dry. Come on, little author, and update more. Moreover, the male protagonist's character needs to be enriched, just like a 2b boss [face covering]

Personally, I think it's okay. I hope there won't be a heroine who has been chiseled. I also need to adjust the character. The male protagonist has gained some kind of business proficiency and is a bit like a domineering president. He rubs the middle of his nose and is irritable.

Very cool, good way to kill time

Well written. Not bad.

Too little. Is that okay?

The writing is okay. The subject matter is very novel. At the beginning, you have to defeat the boss Liu Ruyan. It's not the eunuch pulling the text.

It seems okay so far, but the number of words is too few. Let's go to my library and eat ashes first [smiles]

Do you want the whole plot about being on a business trip and not working and still getting paid to come out [laughing]