
Building an Organization in a Crossover World: From the Start, I Have a Lightning Palm!
人在综漫建组织:开局掌心雷!
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 80k Words
- Genre
- Urban
- Subgenre
- Urban High-Concept
- Updated
- 1mo ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
44Chapters
22Reads
111Shelves
4.1kReads · all time
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Reader comments 4
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The front part is well written, the various chapters are well stitched, and the writing style is okay. There are only two bad points. First, the author likes three-dimensional heroines more than two-dimensional heroines; second, the aliens with alien beasts and Tiga have all lost their combat power. The combat power of other series and the monsters in the arcana is too different. Even if the author cheats the protagonist and fights the monsters, the focus will probably be on the arcana. After all, they are too weak compared to the monsters in other worlds. My personal suggestion is to either delete the Austrian worldview while writing less, or reduce the proportion of Austrian scenes, otherwise it won't be long enough [Thoughts]
Eat a thunderbolt from my palm
Good luck.
Are there any updates to previous books?