Re:Zero: The Sin of Vanity

He is a rare protagonist who cherishes his words like gold. He has a very melancholy temperament. One of his attractions for cats may be that he is willing to say a few more words (?) He is very kind to cats (...) The protagonist is an old man who traveled through time in 1915. He doesn't look too young. He looks like he is over 30 years old in the original world. In order to find his hometown, he works hard in the re0 world and waits for a hundred years for the arrival of the cat. The whole thing is lifeless and nihilistic, full of ghost feeling. If I have to say it, it's like Kiritsugu and Kotomine Kirei, but the core is different. Although he looks like a strict father, he is actually a kind father (?) Who will not hold on to his children tightly. His strong nihilistic spirit makes the protagonist fly a kite. When people around him leave on their own initiative, he will watch them leave, and even if he misses them occasionally, he will not take the initiative to see them. The cat's big daddy

Well, first of all, the battle scenes in this book are particularly immersive, giving me the feeling of watching an anime, and the setting respects the original work. The character design of the protagonist is also very three-dimensional, unlike other novels where the protagonist travels through time and makes all kinds of jokes. I'm really looking forward to the scene where the male protagonist meets 486/Reinhardt, and I don't know if it's due to factors, but the male protagonist's character is becoming more and more like Pandora. I really value the bond between the male protagonist and the Sin Archbishop, so I feel that the male protagonist is walking the path of a villain. It's good to redeem himself. When the male protagonist finally sees 486, will he not have the emotion he originally expected, but the shadow of the Witch Cult and Pandora, gradually denying the truth and completely sinking into "pretend" for hundreds of years? I still look forward to the male protagonist saying those words in front of the protagonist group, "I am the Archbishop of the Witch Cult, Archbishop Altaf." I hope the author can continue writing, I like Pandora the most ❤️

The characters are well created, and I have the desire to read on. I hope the author can write more words every day in the future. I am really diligent, diligent, diligent, diligent, diligent, diligent, diligent, diligent, diligent, diligent, diligent, diligent, diligent, diligent, diligent, diligent, diligent, diligent, diligent and diligent.

. The descriptions in this book are really amazing. You may feel a little stream of consciousness when reading the first few chapters, but there is a description of a battle in the back. Wow, the author's description is so immersive that it is very visual, just like watching animation. The development of the plot is quite interesting now, I look forward to the follow-up. ❤️

For a new author, this is undoubtedly excellent😏The writing is good, the plot has no trace of AI, the fighting scenes are well written, and the updates are also very diligent. I am looking forward to shouting out the words to the protagonist that Vadasiva pretends to be a sin, the priest is the pretender😋Come on, young author, you will definitely become popular, just treat it as a share, give me a five-star support😎 I really have to say a few words after seeing it from no reviews. Yes, the writing is indeed good, but the most basic thing in writing is the protagonist. There are so many chapters without the protagonist's role. What are the discussions about? The protagonist has too few roles, and I have no desire to read it. If you want to go further with this book, First of all, we need to mention the role of the protagonist. The current situation of this book is very embarrassing. It is not like a fan fiction. It has many chapters and is all about Subaru. If you can't figure out how to add the role of the protagonist, immediately change the name and delete the chapter. If you can't tell what character to add, just write it. It's a Subaru fanfic. I think the most ridiculous thing about this novel is that I've been reading it for so long. I can even forget the name of the protagonist. The frequency of appearances is pitiful. I know that the character of the protagonist is taciturn. If he is not allowed to do more, he will definitely not do more. But you can't let him. Let him be a rolling wood. I know that these chapters are indeed necessary to write. After all, Subaru does need a growth process, but these chapters are too long, smelly and long. The last time I saw such a smelly and long chapter was Gu's Immortal Zombie Chapter. The protagonist has played very little role so far. Lian, since the main character is here for Subaru, he must join a group. The few losers will be carried in the front, and the strongest one will take care of the economy in the back. You have to give Subaru some snacks. It's not that you give him a piece of bread when he is hungry, but you should protect him. Since Subaru is carrying him back. The hope of the family is so irresponsible to him. You can write about hundreds of years of waiting for a rolling tree, but don't be so stinky and so long. Since there is such a strong protagonist, he can help Subaru grow up and play the role of a guide instead of being a rolling tree. Some chapters can be deleted. I It's hard to say anything. The most important thing now is to add the role of the protagonist. If you don't add the role of the protagonist, you can leave out this character. How can there be a novel that does not include the protagonist? You can change the perspective but it does not require you to change the protagonist. I know that writing a book is difficult. After all, it is difficult to write a book. It's hard to take time out of your busy schedule to write down so many things when you're so busy. But if you write it, you have to write it well. Busyness is never an excuse. The next direction of this book depends on you. If you don't give the protagonist a role, this book will be read by fewer and fewer people in the future. @Obverse I also really hope that this book will get better and better, so I think it is necessary for me to put these things on the surface. I am also very tired writing this short essay🤦

Not bad, but there are a few problems. First, the factor can only be in one person, and the transfer method is the death of the previous factor recipient. For example, Petra only obtained the melancholy factor kept by Clinder after Hector died, and she needs to pay a price to use the ability. The protagonist and Pandora have factors at the same time, which is strange. It may be the author's own setting. Second, there is a paragraph that is copied from the public. However, the latest chapter is not bad, there is not much AI polishing, and the overall writing and plot design is relatively good. Currently supported

I've seen Chapter 18, so the arrival of the male protagonist can't change anything. It neither saves nor destroys, so it's not a time-travel in vain.

The re0 fanfic in the whole tomato is the best for me. I have always wanted to read a fanfic whose main character is not Subaru. This one is my dream come true. But how to deal with the Minato City and Sloth chapters later? You can't beat other Archbishops in turn. It's not appropriate to fight Subaru with other Archbishops. Standing by and watching will be the same as the original plot. I hope the author can handle it well. Overall, I'm really looking forward to the rest of the plot. Don't give up. Speaking of which, wouldn't the author consider adding a mouth habit to the protagonist? For example, this doesn't make sense, that doesn't make sense, ah, forget it, it's so troublesome and unsociable🍉

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There seems to be no problem with the main plot. It can be seen that the author has put great effort into the name of the protagonist, but there are still small flaws. For example, in theory, there is no such thing as qualified candidates for the factors of pretentiousness and hesitation, but considering that Pandora is still alive, it can be explained.