Back to the Taobao Era: From the Start, I Made 200,000 a Month

The beginning is on the right track, omitting the content of the novel from college entrance examination to starting a business in college and finding a girlfriend. The first chapter is about career and girlfriend. The male protagonist has a strong personality and cannot ink with women. He accepts as many as he can. I have eaten 4 of them so far. Entrepreneurial content does not have to be brainless. Overall good, please update more

Which platform is the old devil? The writing is really awesome, take your time, don't read the whole letter, and read it in one sitting.

The writing is very good, but it is a bit difficult to understand. Everyone knows that the male protagonist has a girlfriend, but there are at least five or six other women. Especially at the two dormitory parties, the beautiful women they just met seemed to immediately set their sights on the male protagonist, and even took the initiative to have an affair with the male protagonist? I took a look and it's a female author. Is this a female mindset? All the women don't care that the male protagonist has a girlfriend, they just fall in love with him and are willing to be a mistress? Junior? The senior sister at the beginning, the school beauty, has many people chasing her, but she just gives him half a thumbs up? The more people chasing you, the higher your expectations, and the harder it is to catch up with you, at least you won't be a mistress, right? The multi-female protagonists that are common in male videos actually pay great attention to the detailed process of describing multiple female protagonists. For example, some female protagonists worship money and want to find a rich man to support themselves, so they don't care about the male protagonist having other women. Some of them deliberately hide it, so there are Shura Field situations. The classic Shura Field is I really don't want to be reborn. Shen Youchu and Xiao Rongyu first knew each other that they were the girlfriend of the male protagonist, and then Xiao Rongyu quit. This is a normal situation. There are also other situations, such as when the male protagonist is too powerful and the woman cannot bear it, so she can only default to the male protagonist to find other women, for various reasons combined. Multiple female protagonists are difficult. If you want to write well, how to reasonably multiple female protagonists, this process is almost indispensable. Instead of directly exuding the aura of being a heartthrob, knowing that you have a girlfriend, other school belle-level girls still don't care, which is completely illogical. The author's book is still very interesting. If the process of acquiring girls is written more logically, instead of giving them away one after another without any logic, it will definitely be a good book with a score of 9 or above.

The writing is sophisticated, the narrative expression is very smooth, and there is no lag in reading. School, business, women, social practice, and interpersonal networks are all handled very well. The salary of the employees is also very realistic, and there is no need to divide shares at every turn. The women are also handled well. The scumbag is very good at playing. He cares carefully when he should be warm and caring, trains when he needs it, and teases when he needs it. Different personalities give different growth support. There is no licking to the death, and there is no uncontrolled squandering of money like dirt.

It is a very good book. It is comfortable to read. The plot advances steadily without any delay. The character description is very good. The protagonist is decisive in doing things and has his own thoughts and goals. The important thing is that the author really describes a character with his own personality, rather than a protagonist who exists to promote the plot. It is really good. The descriptions of the various supporting characters are also very good. Mu Qiang has his own personality, but Tang is a little awkward at times. Wen is immersed in the sense of immorality and excitement and can't extricate himself. The dialogue descriptions of the six girls who review the discussion in the dormitory after the party are also very good. After making money, they have sex with their wives. The descriptions of the teacher and the teacher's girlfriend are short but can make people feel involved. However, it can also be seen that the author's delicate description of men seems to be a weakness. From the description in the book, it can be seen that the description of men's hearts and personalities is limited to the surface. However, I personally think that this is an advantage. It narrows down one's own weaknesses and then magnifies one's own strengths. It is the standard of "the way of man does not take enough damage but gives more than enough." All in all, this is a good review. As long as the author doesn't make any mistakes later and the author won't have any "eureka ideas", this book will be a standard little novel. Come on! (Just a little suggestion, it's better not to have too many harems. Although I am also a veteran critic, too many characters will not only tire the author, but also the readers.)

It's pretty good at the moment. I can take in girls without any ink marks.

A masterpiece of rebirth in the harem, a master of pua

It's great, but the writing style is a bit literary, but it still has the rhythm of an online article, and the needle doesn't stick.

The book is good. There are basically no repeated faces of the female characters. Each one has its own highlights. The career line is well detailed. And unlike other books, if you want to write about every day, this one will be skipped appropriately. The career line and the emotional line can be combined, and you won't be upset about one aspect being constantly present.

I asked why the career line was all mentioned in one stroke, and it turned out to be a female author. However, the emotional line is really well written. I haven't seen a female author of this level in a long time. It is worth recommending.