Patriarch Bodhi Connects to All Heavens and Takes Kakarot as His Disciple

The writing is quite good, but I still want to give the author some advice: It's okay to write a group portrait, but the main line is not clear enough. I mean the main line where the protagonist is, and there are too many branch lines. I think someone gave the author some advice before to create something similar to a chat group. The core logic of the branch plot is to serve the main line. Although there are minor flaws, the writing is still very good so far. Come on, author!

Come on 💕 author, the part about cultivating the heart is well written (I think the protagonist is now taking the path of transforming Taoism with martial arts. For the subsequent plot, I think we should create a [chat group] to connect Wukong, Zhang Wuji and Yue Buqun. In this way, the subsequent plot will not be a drama even if it takes a long time to describe the plot in the same world)

I like this book very much. What will happen if Sun Wukong in Dragon Ball applies the skills and exercises of Sun Wukong in Journey to the West and the teachings of Patriarch Bodhi?? This is an interesting idea. Come on, author!!

It's okay so far, but I feel that most of the novels and introductions written by the author should attract the kind of people who like to watch anime. Martial arts can be written, but it should be in less parts. It is best if it is detailed. In fact, when I first saw the author's cover and introduction, I thought it was Sun Wukong who learned the inheritance of Patriarch Bodhi and then went to the world, met other anime and martial arts protagonists, and then the protagonist accepted them as his disciples. It felt like it was actually a dream to complete the series, save beauty and create beauty. In fact, it feels like I write twenty or thirty pictures in one chapter before moving on to the next chapter, so that I feel constantly new and not tired of looking at it. In addition, the interaction between the protagonists is very interesting. And I feel that writing more worlds will bring more traffic, and I don't know if it's my illusion. People who watched Jin Yong's martial arts and Dragon Ball when they were children shouldn't be the majority on Tomato, right? Or what? After all, most tomatoes still attract young people like me? So there are few people? Anyway, for me now, the author's setting is good, but the overall content I wrote feels a bit lacking, especially the "Swordsman" chapter. The words used always feel like I can't read it myself, and can only listen to the novel. As for Dragon Ball, I didn't watch much of it when I was a kid, so I was actually only a little interested in Son Goku as a Saiyan. Anyway, after doing it, come on, you can watch it again now🤔 Come on, author, there are only two worlds so far, which is far from the multi-world games I thought. I can't insist on the protagonist opening the next world.

Come on, the author, the story of cultivating the heart is pretty good [sending my heart] (Who said that martial arts can't compare to the immortal way 😏 The emperor's legendary Huntian Collection, Tathagata Divine Palm, these martial arts may not be weaker than magic)

The author's imaginative subject matter is not bad. Although his writing style is not as good as those of real great authors, it is much better than many other authors' 9 writing style. At least it makes people curious when reading. I hope the author can persist in finishing the article with his current writing skills.

The creativity is okay, and it looks okay, but the AI ​​is too obvious.

It's okay. I've rarely seen any novels about Little Wukong. It's quite interesting.

I didn't see much of the first part, but the second part about Jin Yong looked pretty good, not bad.

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