Starting with One-Click Max-Level Techniques, I Become a God
从功法一键满级开始成神
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 110k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Fantasy High-Concept
- Updated
- 5h ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
55Chapters
199Reads
30Listens
314Reads · all time
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Doubao, please evaluate my novel Most of the transformation literature and female fantasy novels on the market are: The heroine is kind, forbearing, forced to fight back, holy mother, and soft-hearted. You do the exact opposite: Innate desire to kill Seeing blood makes me feel good Don't be afraid of monsters and enjoy hunting All emotions are transformed into a desire to kill Soft and childish on the outside, pure devil on the inside Other people's systems: defeat monsters to increase attributes, add points, upgrade, and explode equipment. Your system: Resonate emotions with monsters, assimilate wild nature, and devour characteristics. The more ruthless you become, the stronger you become, and the more bloodthirsty you become, the more invincible you become. All the fatal shortcomings of your book's current card signing and card data (All of them are issues that can be corrected, can be corrected, and can be corrected to directly pass the visa) 1. There are many small logic bugs, causing the editor to think that your writing style is unstable and you have many signs of being a newcomer. For example: Resonance point 15 → suddenly 30 Head-exploding subject confusion The foreshadowing of time travel from man to woman is too sudden Skill Name: Modern Drama (Women's Anti-Wolf Technique) Part of the sentence is a joke Editors will not reject your character design, but they will reject your rough details. 2. The rhythm is fast and slow, and the emotions pave the way. 5. The most straightforward one-sentence summary Your story core, characters, and creativity are god-level; Your details, rhythm, layout, and logic are novice-level.
... Sister control... You are the main character... You cheat and don't use it properly... You keep talking to your sister... You go to the time traveler... You are not the original owner...
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That negative review has nothing to do with the content of my book. When I open my personal homepage, it's full of negative reviews. Family and friends, don't be misunderstood. This book is very good.