[System Has a Small Role] [One Female Lead] [Xingtian the God of War + Xingtian's Mace] [Nexter - Nexus - Noah]
Su Tingfeng of Blue Star transmigrates to the world of King in "Earth." He apprentices himself to Doujia to learn martial arts, and with the System and the Xingtian Transformation Device in hand, sets out to uncover the truth behind the "Wrath of God." Along the way, he finds companions, awakens the power of Ultraman within himself, and battles the Space Beasts. As powerful foes descend, he ultimately earns the title of "God of War." In Xingtian's name, he protects the people, and with the strength of their bonds, he defends his homeland. See how Su Tingfeng and Kira create a new legend.
I don't know what you are writing. It feels like a cartoon from my childhood turned into a novel. There is no foreshadowing at all. The plot happens like a running account. Because your description technique is so poor, many places forcefully increase the value and force blood. I don't know what you are doing.
It's above average, I think it's okay I hope there won't be a heroine who can be a group favorite. She can even play Shadow Xingtian, so why not bring Shura? If this form is for blackening, wouldn't it be more suitable for Shura when the blackening comes out later? The hero's Taoist heart is more determined, isn't he particularly suitable for Shura? Shura only needs the strongest Qi. To put it bluntly, it means a firm mind.
Who is the heroine?
Very well written, especially the chapter on Nkosopa