High Martial: I Transformed Into a Girl, and My Little Sister Turned Out to Be My Roommate
高武：变身少女，妹妹竟是我室友
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 115k Words
- Genre
- Urban
- Subgenre
- Urban High Martial Arts
- Updated
- 7d ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
49Chapters
7kReads
1.8kShelves
1.9kListens
12.8kReads · all time
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Reader comments 5
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It's just average, not much fun. The characters' emotions develop inexplicably and quickly. It feels like nothing happened. The other characters' affection for the protagonist just keeps rising. It's completely impossible to tell where the emotions are generated. You can't say that the protagonist is a pure succubus. Everyone falls in love with the protagonist at first sight, right? There are also many flaws in combat descriptions, such as a large number of words such as "immediately" and "instantly". For example, someone attacks immediately and the monster defends instantly. This seems stiff and has no visual sense. In fact, if you don't know how to write about combat, you can try to write as little as possible. For example, what skills someone used to cause what effect, and then the protagonist added a fatal blow, and the battle was over. What's more serious is the pressure on combat power. When the protagonist enters the school's secret realm, the protagonist's realm is two realms higher than the other highest realms. As a result, the performance is not outstanding, or even can only be said to be average. The author has added a lot of settings to limit the protagonist's strength, which makes me feel inexplicably frustrated. There is a gap between a dish that looks exquisite but tastes quite average. The writing style is relatively immature, and there are many textual errors. I personally rate this novel at about 7 points. My evaluation is: the subject matter is not novel, the writing style is immature, and there are deficiencies everywhere. It is undoubtedly a work for practicing writing.
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Come on, the cover is also good. It would be better if the watermark on the carob bag on the lower right side was removed.
Guess what, I'm going to start raising books
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