Honkai: Star Rail: Yes, the Sky Screen Shows the Ancients Like Thunder

The author's writing is okay. It is a good movie-watching article. I would like to make a small suggestion: those doomsday monsters or the orderlies that can destroy planets can cause some trouble for the viewers during the battle or feel the destructive power together. This is also one of the highlights of the movie-watching article. Otherwise, it would be very boring for me. If you don't know your strength, the movie-watchers will make such comments in every chapter like I can do it, which is also very annoying 🤔🤔🤔 In short, come on ✊ The ancients in this book are Westerners, there are almost no Easterners, and these ancients are like watching a play, and they are particularly good at spreading rumors 🤦 🤦

It is very good. The descriptions of ancient people from various countries in China and foreign countries are pretty good. At least I think it is more in line with the original character design. I also suggest that the author can write about a simulated universe later. Finally, a major highlight of the movie viewing article is the reaction of the people watching the movie. After all, this is the core of the movie viewing article. The ancient people's views and reactions to Bengtie's various factions and destiny are also a major attraction.

The writing is okay, but the progress is too slow. Compared with other books of the same type, this book has more off-screen chats, but the proportion of content inside and outside the screen is out of balance. I hope to increase the content of the behind-the-scenes Star Iron plot and speed up the progress. Hopefully it's 46 or 55 scale. Star Iron/Ancient: 3/7 ratio is fine. What is quite distinctive about the ancients is that there are too few star irons, which makes it a bit impatient to see.

Reduce the reaction of ancient people and increase the content of Collapse Iron

After observing it for a few days, I found that the author really wrote with great care. Come on 👍👍👍👍 I suggest reducing the content unrelated to the canopy and slightly increasing the character behavior caused by the impact of the canopy. Overall, reduce character reactions. There are too many character reactions. A 1:1 ratio between the sky and the reactions is enough. Try to separate the character reactions in different plot areas to reduce readers' fatigue.

Although it was a bit delayed at first, after reading the book review, I found that the author corrected his mistakes after he knew them, which is very good. I also saw progress in the subsequent plots. It's so procrastinating, it's almost a hundred chapters and Yaliluo hasn't gone yet

There are still too many ancient people!

Write more about simulated universe, destiny

After a quick glance, I saw chapter 20. The audience reacted too much, resulting in very little content to watch. I can understand that the author may want to write in more detail. After all, I have written it before, so I always want to be more detailed. But for the movie-watching stream, my personal understanding is that the best ratio between the movie-watching content and the audience's response within a chapter is six to four or seven to three.

I really don't understand, what's the point of watching this kind of movie for the ancients?