Beast Taming: I Became Invincible After Awakening the Dao Lord's Talent

We're recruiting, good pay Package travel, package rebirth, package delivery system. Because of the new born small world This often leads to a serious shortage of time-travelers, so we are now recruiting time-travelers. First come, first served regardless of gender or age. Give it a like and you'll get it Travel through opportunities and systems. (Try it, it's free anyway)

It's okay, but it feels a bit routine. In addition, the protagonist's spirit beasts are not time-based, and they are holiday culture. The more novel ones like the Suzaku Star Spirit are all in the protagonist's family. Some of the protagonists are ordinary. I don't like it very much. I hope to give the protagonist some more novel spiritual beasts.

It's okay, there are no poisonous points or thunderous points, but there are no bright spots either. It's very bland and leans towards a slow pace and slow life.

Ordinary training flow, daily but slightly more stressful. I've read a lot of articles, so I don't have any prejudice against learning from others, but with the beauty of jade in front of me, it's hard to avoid feeling a bit uninteresting. If you're rubbing it with your hands, keep going👍 The author himself said it was original, but in fact there are a lot of influences from Tsukiori. To be honest, I posted a comment and still received criticism, which is unlucky.

The protagonist's family background is average, but he can't bear the thought of his mother becoming a phoenix. From then on, there is a young man who gnaws at his master in the world of beast control.

At present, in the early stage of Chapter 76, there is a bit of my "Beast Control; My Butterfly is the Villain Template" feeling, which should be a reference, but the plot direction later is completely different. Overall, it is a very good book. If you like daily cultivation, you can read it. Anyway, I like both books.

Has the author read the Beast Control Evolver? There is a fatal problem. The author, your dialogues are too stiff and have no human touch at all. They look so distorted. You don't know how to use honorifics and honorifics. You write people with no emotional intelligence at all. When calling people who are stronger and older than you, just directly, you, you, you, eh😂, the dialogue is too awkward.

Don't let it go unfinished, keep updating, the plot is rich. I hope the heroine is a nine-tailed white fox, and I hope the author will take a look at my review.

It's more of a daily beast-controlling article. There are many kinds of beast-controlling. It's pretty good.

How should I put it, overall it's okay, but there are a lot of typos. It would look better if some typos were corrected.