Genshin Impact: I Accidentally Became Sandrone's Reincarnated Younger Sister

The writing is very good, but if you want to score high, you need to be more elegant. Try not to write words like those used on the Internet, or words that do not fit the character of Genshin Impact.

The writing is quite good and highly recommended, but I have some small suggestions. I can't say that the shortcomings are just what I personally don't like (of course this is just my personal feeling) 1. The plot should be written around the protagonist Anna as much as possible. The traveler role can be appropriately reduced or there is no need to be particularly detailed. 2. Internet memes and some gangster language can be used appropriately, otherwise the language will be obvious. Of course, this book is also very good, and the plot development is very interesting and deserves five stars.

The most amazing novel I have ever read in my life. It's not an old bandage, I suggest you don't read it. Children must not see Liyue Zhang, our protagonist becomes human. Author, are you sober? Who is the protagonist of this article?

I am the 78th generation disciple of Hua Tuo, but my master never recognized me, so I tried my best to get him to recognize me. Suddenly on this day I saw this book, and my master recognized me. Thank you to the author.

Yes, very interesting. I recommend more interactions between Anna and the executives.

If you read this novel, you must prepare a lot of bandages, because I'm afraid you won't be able to hold them.

So cool, I like it

Not bad, quite to your liking, group favorite NB 😘😘

Ying is like a star, abstract

Will the clockwork doll also have a sister? Then I have to taste it. What I want to look at is this mouth tooth