Does a Retired Magical Boy Dream of His Fake Dead Wife?

The pace of transformation writing can be slow, but the transformation cannot be slow. Moreover, the chapter classification is unclear. Should we say that it is a case of literary youth? It's a bit chilling that readers are still required to count the chapters themselves. The biggest problem with this book seems to be these two points? In fact, I think there is another general disadvantage that can easily arise from using first-person narration. After looking at the comment section, everyone actually thinks this is an advantage or a sign of good writing? The inner monologue of the protagonist is too overwhelming. At the beginning of the work, the subjective reality of the first-person perspective is used to create a strong sense of substitution. However, the consequence of this is that the rhythm of the plot is out of control and constantly delayed. The most intuitive thing is of course that it is too slow to end up with the current situation of "changing the text and keeping the same". Four stars of encouragement, come on!

Looking forward to the plot of Double Luminous Orchid...

I have inner self-denial, and there are too many sad monologues, which makes the articles I have written so far very depressing, which makes me feel uncomfortable. However, the detailed descriptions are so detailed that it makes me feel uncomfortable but I want to continue reading. The slow pace can also be gradual, and the transformation is quite slow, but I can accept it. Note for reading: It is very slow to warm up and transform, and the early part of the article is very depressing.

The logic is very strict, the plot is very interesting, and the boss has great control over pronouns! The first person view is also very comfortable. The update is of such high quality, it's the first time I've read a novel in so long. The pace is a bit slow due to the boss's outline and word count, but it's very suitable for reading slowly when you're bored. The psychological portrayal of the characters is also boundless and very close to life (the current performance of Corolla in the novel is also the same), with a mixture of bitterness and sweetness. The world of magical girls is not all beauty and love. Although I still don't know what species the nightingale is (it looks a bit like a narcissus for some reason, haha~), I am looking forward to the next performance of the boss.

It has a basic outline, lots of author interaction, good characterization, and a good plot. (Old readers may be subjective, I recommend reading it if you are interested)

I'd love to give high marks, but I can actually do it (no, what am I talking about) My point of view: The protagonist is Ou (although I only read the first few chapters) The protagonist was framed inexplicably. No one stipulated that he could not fall in love with him. What's more, with two different identities, he could completely explain his deceased wife in a different way. He could also be exposed online because of himself. He was still hesitant to send a message (I know the character problem, but it makes me feel uncomfortable). After all, it can't be worse, right? This book picks people, see you again if you are destined (it feels better if you are too lazy to read the rest)

Urgent, urgent, urgent, urgent, I was already crying. After a busy day, I went home in a hurry and opened the novel. Boss, why are you dead? [Fear] No, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no. I must go and win the Easter match 😢 😢 😢, it's been a long time since I've seen a novel that appeals to me 🥺

The logic is strong and the plot is interesting. I just don't know what species my wife is. I'm really looking forward to what the plot will be like when the male protagonist becomes a woman.

It would be nice if the author had an ending where the protagonist is mentally schizophrenic 😜😜😜

No, no, no, no, this is undoubtedly delicious 🤤 🤤 🤤 The early stage is not as boring as imagined. It is very easy to read, but there are not many bad jokes. Whether it is the emotion of the nightingale towards Lao Lin or the greenness of Lao Lin, it is undoubtedly delicious. The only drawback is that there are too few. I suggest the author update 10,000 words per day [laughter] To be honest, this book is not that depressing. The only thing that might make people abandon it is the one before Nightingale comes out. In fact, the previous writing is also very good. The first-person writing makes people feel immersed and understand the situation of the prison forest. The follow-up Nightingale comes out makes people feel more redeemed. 🤔 Imagine that you have lost your job and your life is in a mess. A beautiful girl suddenly appears like a light in the dark, caring and taking care of you. Wouldn't it feel particularly refreshing?