I’m a Senior in High School. What Do You Mean, a Succubus-Raising System?

The writing is okay, girls and relationship scenes are quite normal, but there is a tendency to have a single female protagonist at the moment. I think the male protagonist, the succubus, is designed to be both male and female. In fact, it is suitable for writing about a heartthrob or something, and it seems that the succubus mission must be close to the entertainment industry. The protagonist is currently a top student+singer+actor, and I guess there will be countless fans of girlfriends and boyfriends in the future. Writing a romance or something, I always feel that it will be very strange later.

Very good, no conflict plot It's a pity. I thought it was a uniquely beautiful article, but I didn't expect that romanticism would rise from the beginning.

Academic Master➕Tennis➕Succubus, well detailed and well written. There are traces of AI retouching, but it's okay, about 10%. Summary, slightly better than normal, good review😋 Why does AI account for so much recently? Is it the reason why perfect attendance was changed? Kids, run! 🤓

Let me comment! ! ! Great writing! ! ! ! It's not poisonous either! ! The protagonist's image is well written! ! ! ! The youthful male height, the youthful spirit, the ambiguous atmosphere, the career line, and the emotional line are all very well written! ! And pure love! ! If you meet someone and fall in love with someone else, and the emotional line is still wet, it won't look good! ! It's just right now, and the protagonist's image as an adolescent boy is very high, not greasy, refreshing, and full of youthful spirit! So now this emotional ambiguity is really great! Come on, author!

The only problem is that the love line comes too fast and suddenly. When writing succubus stories, people usually write about being single or add a love line in the middle and late stages. It's too early to write now. I haven't learned about tennis, but I enjoyed watching it. Come on, author. I hope you can refine it later. The main problem is the love line. I hope the author can consider releasing it later.

It's well written. Many similar articles always paint the opposite person in a bad light. This one is relatively objective. I think AI can also be used. After all, the development of the times cannot be stopped.

I really think this is a very good novel that you can't help but keep following. The author's writing style is very comfortable, and it reads smoothly and naturally, without the feeling of a rigid pile of words. The rhythm of the story is well grasped, not procrastinating or rushed, the plot is loose and tight, making it easy to read, and the sense of substitution is particularly strong, making people unable to stop after reading it. What I like most is the characterization in the book. Each character is very real and three-dimensional, not a thin tool character. The growth and changes of the protagonist are very natural. The experiences, mentality and choices along the way are all reasonable and can make people truly feel the growth and transformation of the characters. The supporting characters also have their own personalities and characteristics, as well as their own ideas and persistence, making the whole story more full and warm. The plot logic of the whole story is clear and the structure is complete. The author is very good at foreshadowing the details. The foreshadowing laid in the front will slowly come back later. It can be seen that the writing is very careful. The plot arrangement is reasonable, with both exciting and tense high-energy scenes as well as delicate and warm daily plots. It is relaxed and relaxed, making it particularly comfortable to watch. I would also like to express my special thanks to the author for his hard work. It is really not easy to write a novel. It requires stable updates, repeated polishing of the plot, and careful characterization of the characters. The author spends time and energy to write out the content of each chapter bit by bit. Being able to persist in creating and take every plot seriously is really worthy of respect. I am very grateful to read such a thoughtful work, and I am very grateful to the author for his persistence and dedication. Overall, this is a good book of high quality and worth reading carefully. The plot is engaging and the characters are vivid. It is very therapeutic and enjoyable to read. I will continue to follow up, fully support the author, and look forward to the follow-up work. This is a high-quality work that will make people linger for a long time after reading it, and it will be particularly amazing. The author's writing style is delicate and skillful, the writing is smooth and natural, and the narrative rhythm is relaxed and moderate. There is no piling up of exaggerated and empty words, and there is no redundant plot that is lagging and filled with water. The simple words and ink create an atmospheric, vivid and complete story world. The immersive reading experience makes people more and more addicted as they read. The character creation in this article is particularly brilliant, completely breaking away from the same flat characters. Each character in the book has his or her own personality, obsessions and bottom line, and is three-dimensional and full of flesh and blood. The protagonist's growth path is clear and transparent, every transformation and decision is well-founded, and the progression layer by layer is very moving. The images of various supporting characters are also delicately portrayed, vivid and real, making the whole story full of warmth and fireworks, which is particularly touching. The plot concept is ingenious and novel, and the overall logic is rigorous and rigorous. The author is good at laying down detailed foreshadowing, and the detailed foreshadowing in the early stage is echoed one by one in the subsequent plot, making the story structure complete and full. The plot is appropriately tight, with ups and downs of high-energy famous scenes, as well as gentle and healing daily details. The plot advances naturally and smoothly, and the viewing experience is excellent. Behind a good piece of work is the author's silent perseverance and hard work. Every word is written with painstaking effort. The wonderful plot of each chapter and the polishing of every delicate detail are the result of the author's desk-bound creation and careful carving. Stable updates day after day and patient polishing of the story and characters allowed us to encounter such a wonderful story. I sincerely thank the author for his persistence and dedication! Overall, this is a high-quality article with solid writing, exciting plot, and gentle intention. It is both interesting and in-depth. I sincerely praise the author's writing style and dedication. I will continue to follow up and give my full support, and look forward to more exciting content in the future! More exciting content!

Overall, it is pretty good and can be read. As for the type of urban system, there are some highlights and new ideas. It is not very brilliant, but at least it can be read. The most important thing is that the amount of updates is good. As of 8:19 pm today, seven chapters have been updated, nearly 15,000 words. This amount of updates is still acceptable, and it can be said to be a large amount of content.

The writing is quite touching, and the emotional scenes are okay, but it's a little early, and the main character has just started to develop.

I think it's quite interesting, but it's best not to write about feelings. It feels weird. It's too early. I have studies and a career, so it's better to write about these things.