
Pokemon: The Pokémon Master Begins in Sinnoh
宝可梦,宝可梦大师从神奥开始
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 221k Words
- Genre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 14d ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
99Chapters
2.8kReads
108Shelves
261Listens
29.6kReads · all time
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I don't know if the author can see it, but now that I have seen it, I feel that it is well written. There are few Pokémon novels that I can keep reading. However, the shortcomings are also obvious, that is, the emotional line is too thick, and I don't know whether I am reading Pokémon or a youth love novel. The author brought Xiaoguang and Xiaozhi to life, but the other supporting characters are just supporting characters and are thrown away after use. Over-description for a long time will make people tired. The author has not grasped the key point of excitement. The early emotional line made people look forward to it, but now it makes other events too bland and boring, and just blindly writes emotional descriptions. But it will be different if you change something. Without breaking away from the character, you can write interesting dialogues, interesting things, passionate adventures, shocking pictures, other people's unique highlights, characteristics, charms, fun interactions with Pokémon, and extra relaxing plots. These are all exciting, and they will also make the whole novel full of fun, passion, and warmth. Let other readers know that this is Pokémon, the shining point of Pokémon alone, when they read on. Of course, this is just my personal opinion. I hope the author can write better content and plot.
What I like most about this book is the rhythm of the relationship development between Zhiguang and Zhiguang. When the flowers bloom on the road, Junke slowly returns home and waits for things to come true. In the few books I read before, I felt that the development was too fast, sweet and sweet, but it was too easy to get, and I always felt that it was not worthy of the weight in my heart.
I like this one. Although it has many shortcomings, it is much better than other brainless novels. Xiaozhi is not brainless, and his emotions are bound to the elves. The heroine is not the kind of brainless novels that are brainlessly posted up. It is developmental. The author really understands the plot, and is not a trick to blindly accept female characters. However, it lacks some psychology and action descriptions, so some of the content is a bit white and bland, but it is still five stars, because this is the most similar to Xiaozhi's rebirth sequel I have ever read [I learned]
I feel like the emotional drama is well written
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Very good looking and highly recommended