Xingtie: Do You Dare to Touch This Dragon Order? Fat and Courageous

Overall, it was good, but one thing that bothered me was that the protagonist just woke up from a deep sleep and wanted to find Feiying. As a result, because of his lack of strength, he teleported to Grammer and rescued Liuying, and then put the matter of finding Feiying on hold. As I slowly accepted the daily life of Liuying and the protagonist, At that time, the protagonist woke up from hunger again after sleeping for a long time. Liu Ying and the others were on a mission and were not at home, so the protagonist teleported directly to Luofu. After eating, they suddenly rescued Bai Heng. When Liu Ying and the others came back, they found that the protagonist was gone and they were very worried. We just said that they were going to find something to eat when they woke up, wouldn't they leave a message? The plot seems to involve multiple women, but does the author really not plan to find Feiying earlier? When Feiying was still Jianmu, the protagonist had already slept on her branch for a long time. After waking up, Feiying waited for such a long time [face covering]. This is like the ancient novel about chasing his wife. Various accidents on the way to chase his wife caused the protagonist to interact with other girls. Later, when he got to the head wife, there was another explanation [eating melon], although it was a bit forced. , But Liu Ying was accidentally saved because of his lack of strength, and Bai Heng was saved by accident because the protagonist happened to be hungry, and after teleporting to the destination, he happened to find out that it was the period of Sudden Rebellion [Eating Melon]. From the first time the protagonist fell asleep to the time he rescued Bai Heng, it was a hundred years. Do you really have no time to see Feiying? I don't believe it if I don't know where she is. After all, the protagonist still has a branch of hers with him. He vaguely knew the location through this branch when he woke up. He only arrived at Grammer because his power was not yet familiar. In short, there is no problem with the plot. After all, there are multiple girls. The above is just my personal opinion

The ghost eyes appear in front of the Bone Tree, and Yang Jian transforms into Yang Jian on the yin and yang road! My name is Yang Jian. If people in the world want to worship God, they can also call me Yang Jian! In the evil world of the five turbidities, hell is empty, evil ghosts are resurrected, and the world is like a prison. My name is Yang Jian. I was born in this desperate supernatural era. The ghosts in this world have appeared, so where are the gods? I have experienced supernatural events again and again, and the power I control has become stronger and stronger, but my road will eventually come to an end. The era of supernatural beings has completely arrived, and the world has lost all hope. Since there is no god in the world, then I will create a real god! An invincible god on earth. When the supernatural begins to revive, evil ghosts reappear, all living beings suffer, and the world calls out your name, you will appear in the world, exorcise ghosts and eliminate evil, save people and promote good. Your name is Yang Jian! My name is Yang Jian. I was born in this supernatural era of despair. The ghosts of this world have appeared. So where are the gods? I have experienced supernatural events again and again, and the power I control is getting stronger and stronger. But my road will eventually come to an end. The supernatural era has completely arrived. This world has lost all hope. Since there is no god in the world, then I will create a real god, an invincible human god. When the supernatural begins to revive, the evil ghost appears again, and all living beings suffer. The moment the world calls out your name, you will appear in the world, drive out ghosts and eliminate evil, save people and promote good. Your name is Yang Jian!

When will you transform? What does it look like after you transform? Can the author reveal more?

It looks good, but when did the villain's company get destroyed by the protagonist?

I already see the potential of this book

It's very nice to be specific, so I gave it five stars anyway.

Overall, it looks better

Let me taste it It's okay, there's no big problem. Just don't do some live broadcasts like another book, or the kind where players can watch the live broadcasts. I'm not interested in this kind of thing at all. The pace is a bit slow. I can write several pieces for one thing. The updates are also slow. I'd better keep it up a little longer.

When I saw the AI-generated bean bag on the cover, I was instantly shocked.

I think it looks pretty