The Lucky Little Rat's Bankrupt Brother Is the Demon King's Guardian

The writing is very nice, and the writing style is superb. However, the text is quite stereotyped. There are many descriptions in the article that women who are beautiful can be relied on for their appearance. The male partner in the article is a bit annoying. Although he is good to the heroine, he has a sense of self-righteousness. To be honest, it is better to design the heroine's sister to be very powerful to lead the heroine's early transition. They The relationship between the three of them is very warm, and in the latest chapters, you can see that the male protagonist has been saying that the female protagonist is weak, useless but delicious cakes, etc., And the male protagonist describes the female protagonist's beauty many times in the article, which seems a bit uncomfortable. Although the female protagonist is weak now, she is also working hard to become stronger and has a tough heart, but overall, it looks good and the writing is very good.

It's a very real game environment, and the teammates I met while playing the game are almost identical to each other, but the gender stereotypes in the article are a bit heavy. Currently, I see two girls quarreling in the escort club because they are CP fans and Wei fans, and the sound is very loud. The man next to the heroine pushes the heroine and other girls. He thinks the heroine is very good and has quality. How can I put it, the heroine is indeed very qualified and polite, but I don't like to show it by pushing against other people. Moreover, it is a man who targets the heroine in the early stage and scolds her for being rude. I would rather avoid this in advance.

There are some descriptions of supporting characters in it, which repeatedly struck me as interesting, but the author's writing style is very beautiful, and the subject matter is also very good, and the plot is also very interesting, which made me reluctant to give up reading this article, and then I tied it up in a confused way, and I felt like I was deeply appreciating stinky tofu🌚

It's not bad, but it's too real and looks exactly like some of the people I meet while playing games in real life, so it's not very enjoyable. Moreover, the male protagonist has too few roles, and the sister's brother is very..., Like the second male lead but not likable. When I read the synopsis, I thought it was a sweet story about the sweet alliance between the European Emperor Shushu and the non-Emirati Demon King, but it was a pity.

No one commented on it? I think the writing is very interesting, and it feels like a game from a certain three continents. Watching it made me know a lot of things 🤔, the logic is quite good, the context is very smooth, the character description and emotional details are also very good, and the character design is also very full as I can see now. Good luck, author!!! ✊🏻✊🏻✊🏻😃

It's really beautiful, and the writing is also very good. It's very consistent with the current situation of the game. The female protagonist is a pure devil, and the male protagonist is protected by the devil. There are just too few. Can the author add 100 chapters? It scares me to death.

Seeing the button to urge updates is really... (Grab the author and shake it hard. Jpg) The heroine is timid but very lucky. She is like a treasure hunter. Although her strength is average, she always picks up red materials and meets kind-hearted brothers and sisters. The male protagonist currently plays a small role, and the love story has not yet begun, it is just the team-building stage.

Absolutely amazing. I finally saw a good-looking Koi article again. In the intense and exciting multi-copy master space (I can only say 1/3), FPS search, attack and retreat are launched. At the same time, there are various elements of game-type articles, and Koi is very necessary. You can earn a lot but also spend a lot because the rhythm is very tight. It's amazing! The ultimate goal is thrown out very early, the classic God War, but in fact there is no problem with this design, but if there is only this foreshadowing in this word count, the book will not be too long (.) Including the revelation of the Inhuman camp, it was revealed very early.

Very novel and interesting. I don't think it's as shocking as the comments say, maybe it's because I'm more accepting of it. I think this theme is quite interesting. Although I don't know much about games, it doesn't affect my reading. I just feel that the background is a bit convoluted. I should have been in that game world all the time. Then I felt that I have dug a lot of holes and haven't filled them yet. I am looking forward to the next update. It has been tied up in half a day. There may be some small areas that need improvement, but I think it is great to have such an interesting plot. The heroine is also a growth-oriented, not a complete novice. Come on, come on, the author, come on!

Well, after looking at it, it seems to be quite good. Now the pillars have been updated to a little over 60, and they appear. For the male protagonist, it is about 50 pictures. The emotional drama is too slow, and the male protagonist appears late. In addition, there will be the development of the emotional drama later, and it will take a while. It is too slow, and I don't like it very much, but overall it is okay. Except for the fact that the emotional development is too slow, if you like the relationship that develops faster, uh, I recommend watching other ones. If you like it too fast, you can check it out.