The Strange World: I Can Summon the Fourth Calamity

On the fourth day, the disaster text is not very good, but I feel that the author is pretty good as a newbie. On the fourth day, the resurrection that the disaster relies on the most is restricted by the author. This is also understandable. The problem is that the player's biggest golden finger resurrection has been restricted. The early difficult development should have been described. The author responded. But skipping it, the difficulty for players to obtain equipment in the early stage is limited to the number of resurrections. Players do not dare to be too reckless in the early stage, and use all kinds of wisdom and weirdness to fight wits and courage, update equipment, play methods and strategies for monsters, but none of these are written. Another exciting point of the natural disaster article is the interaction between virtual reality games and reality. There is no such thing as descriptions of the real world after game players go offline, and posts to show off to attract more people to pay attention to the game. After reading dozens of chapters from the first chapter, players have been playing the game, as if they are tireless tools. The entire early development is like a running account. What are the players doing? How many levels the player has reached makes people really uninterested in reading. From level one to level ten, the contribution mall only appeared when it was first unlocked, and the basic workshop appeared in the early stage but disappeared later. In fact, I really hope that the author can refer to "This game is too real" and not advance the plot too fast.

Personally, I think the Fourth Natural Disaster looks like a suspense novel to me. I didn't understand it until the dream part later [facepalm]. But I personally think it's quite interesting, but I just can't understand the first part. I feel like it's my problem [facepalm] After reading it all, I don't know if the author can see it, but I still want to say that the following is my personal opinion. The author can just read it. There is not much poison at the moment. The dialogue can be more emotional, or simply put, there are more words, because I personally feel that every I personally feel a little cold [face covering] The second reason is because the player has already interacted with the official. Will the official discover that the player can be resurrected later? After all, it is impossible for all players to die. Similarly, the official may also know the player if he sees the player he knows die in front of him. , But when he saw the lively and vigorous people in front of him the next day, would he doubt the players? [Thinking], and the plot currently revolves around the game world, maybe a little bit of real life can be added later for comparison, and even further, whether the government in real life will I also noticed that in terms of the details of this game [Eating Melon], my vision in front of the dream was a bit blurry. I don't know if it's because I see faster [face covering] I didn't understand it until the dream, and the Qi family can understand it too. Overall, it's pretty good. Cheers, author [like]

The author's setting is really great! ! ! The protagonist doesn't have many roles, and most of the vision is focused on locals and players. The most shocking thing to me is that every time a small boss or big boss appears, I thought it was the players entering the scene and killing them, but! ! ! The author writes about local people risking their own lives to fight to the death! ! ! Do you understand this shock? Although the players are also looking for another way to save the world, the locals have never given up and left everything to them just because the protagonist and the players appeared! ! ! And the plot is not watery at all. Although the words are short, you can still feel the players' nonsense and seriousness! ! What kind of magical author is this! ! ! !

It's good to read, and the author is very smart. The previous one had hundreds of chapters, and there were still about 20 players. The author has done a good job in this regard. There are already 10,000 players. Let me tell you, even if there are 1 million people, you wouldn't write a biography for everyone. It would be good to pick a few main characters and write them carefully. Besides, the storyline is also very good, there is nothing watery about it. It's really good-looking, and it's an interesting novel set in the fourth natural disaster.

Let's evaluate it. The writing is actually pretty good. It's quite different from the traditional Fourth Natural Disaster novel. The gender of the players is downplayed in the writing. Many settings allow a lot of room for imagination. What this novel describes more is actually a way for players to integrate into another world. I like it. This novel is actually not suitable for those who read the traditional fast-paced four-day disaster, and it is not suitable for those who like to draw gender antagonisms, because this novel actually has very little description of gender. It just uses the name of the game to represent a person. As for whether it is a boy or a girl, you can actually imagine it by yourself.

Nice! After reading dozens of chapters, the story is quite novel. What I like the most is the plot where the player fights monsters. It feels very interesting and the player and the local natives get along quite harmoniously. However, the early plot has a slight flaw. The system does not specify the game rewards. I don't know how many experience points and contribution points the players can get. These will also be improved in the future. I look forward to the author writing better stories in the future!

It is a rare and novel fourth natural disaster and strange novel [Sending Hearts]. The protagonist leaves full power to the fellow villagers to explore, kill and run the map. When I saw the Qi family's ghost controller before, I knew that this family must be evil. The fellow villagers here get along well with the local residents, and they are all very gentle people, so reading this article will not cause a lot of emotional fluctuations, but it will keep people reading.

The tone and interaction in the book feel very much like those generated by AI [smile]

Levels 3 to 4 can be raised to level 10, and levels 4 to 5 should be higher than level 15 to 20, otherwise the combat power will be easily destroyed, and the map should be large, preferably more than a million miles. You can add high-level weird rule areas, the ones around level 7, refer to the death rules of mysterious resurgence, or the poison circle mechanism. After that, high-level warriors and other professions must crush the low-level in a wide range, and destroy the city with one move.

Looks good, cheers to the author [blowing kiss]