I Own a General Store in Kivotos

Great, when will the teacher appear? I want a side ponytail and a big thunder wife type prison master

The article is rich in emotion, and the protagonist has obvious growth, personality, responsibility, and will pay for his actions. The system is more like an ability, just like the aura of Kivotos. It can be used as a store in line with the current world view and given a certain emotional value, which can be regarded as a reasonable enhancement. The personalities of other characters are also vividly displayed, and the daily life is full of atmosphere and relaxed and happy, but I am more looking forward to the growth in the later period. And I think the real shining point of this article is sublimation. The most eye-catching one at present is Xiaochun. I would like to call it the justice of practicing one's heart. Mo Yi's smile froze, but Xiaochun did not take out the ammunition from the bag, but she took out a white thing from it. She expressionlessly fixed the bayonet on the rifle, held the gun with both hands, and approached Mo Yi step by step. Regardless of whether the protagonist was arrogant or faked his death, he was successfully picked by the bayonet. He paid the price 😂, he was a comrade who had a life-long friendship. You don't care how he lived. From the initial innocence to confusion, from paranoia to finally practicing his heart, Xiaochun's writing is quite wonderful, and he has a successful future. He is on his own. I feel that the only shortcoming is the description of emotions and expressions. I feel that it can be more vivid and vivid. I am looking forward to the following stories.

Your rating is... Unable to determine... Even the Ring Finger cannot understand you... Ah no. Your art, in front of this kind of thinking, makes me look small. It is thousands of years ahead of the art of the whole city.

I like it very much. I like plots that change a lot and are very fresh. I have been reading BA second-generation books since 2024. Now, I have read most of the second-generation books. I was not interested at first. I feel that there are no plots and second-generation books that I like. But today I found a very fresh plot and read it in one day. I like it very much. Please keep writing, author. Yours The book is great, more than 90% of second-generation books. People say that your writing is not good because it is a bit tasteless, because they have read less second-generation books. People like me have only known how valuable you are after reading it since 24 years. Most of the second-generation books have the same plot and game line, with some additional settings. It will be boring to read too much. Your writing is great ❤️❤️❤️ I love you, keep writing.

Take a floor first. First of all, thank you to the readers who clicked on this book. Your views and comments are the motivation for the author to move forward. Originally, I expected this book to be completed one by one, but I ignored the amount of text. According to the previous writing progress, the book would not be able to contain 5 million words, so I deleted many branch plots and the plots of some characters. Please forgive me. By the way, the writing style of this book is a bit immature as an exercise, and a lot of attempts have been made. The plot of Koharu has been significantly adjusted, so the image of Koharu in everyone's minds may be quite different. I can't help but apologize here. In the future, I will still make major changes to some characters based on their corresponding personalities, such as the plot of Atsuko I am currently writing. When it is finished, I estimate that the text volume of this book will be 2-3 million words. The plots are all original, so writing will be relatively slow. 4,000 Words a day is the limit. Finally, if you have any questions, you can ask them here. I will reply in turn after seeing them.

It's very good. I haven't seen this kind of ba novel that is both fun and sweet for a long time. I highly recommend it. His emotional drama is not as abrupt as other books. It advances gently. The system is also very lively, not as boring as a panel.

The book is full of laughs, and the heroine has a long emotional line. At least her feelings for the protagonist are not obtrusive. Although there are typos, they can be corrected in time. It can be seen that this book has great potential. It can maintain above 7.0 As expected. Above 8.0, Details need to be adjusted.

It's not bad, but the author is great. As for the prison master, I want the little devil 🙂

The BA article is pretty good, but the author should keep writing and keep it honest.

Quack looks good, Quack is fun. Gaga is so funny｡ :.ﾟヽ(*´∀`)ﾉﾟ.:｡