[Kamen Rider] [Genshin Impact] [Honkai: Star Rail] [Cultivation] [Coming of Age]
Jun Ze, an ordinary member of his home planet, was suddenly assigned a System and dumped into another world. They called it a trial, but it was really a vacation.
With a Rider System from the start, he gained the bloodline of the Nightmare Lord and became the Shock King, yet his heart was set on Cultivation.
As it turned out, the stronger his true form became, the stronger he was after transforming. He could kick off his own foot and soar into the sky.
"Fate?"
Jun Ze gripped his Driver. "Come on, tell it to my Shock King."
"The Shock King is no match for you? No problem."
"The Calamity King and the Order King are waiting for you next."
"You'd better not make me use my final form."
"It'll hurt."
The protagonist is in the original god, mainly cultivating immortals, and the knight ZZZ is the magic weapon. There should be more female protagonists. The writing is acceptable. Fans who are pure knights, please keep your mouth open, and fans who are pure immortals, please keep your mouth down. This book is not pure, but the writing is acceptable, the logic is not problematic (based solely on the setting of the book), the cause and effect are not confusing, and the emotions are well integrated. I hope the author will not make it worse.
Multiple heroines or single heroine?
I think it's pretty good-looking, but it's a bit slow to recruit girls. Those who gave two stars in the comment area probably came to see the Cavaliers. I haven't watched the Cavaliers and I think it's okay.
Author, don't listen to other people's slander. I think it looks good. When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the little praise starts to sound, and the number of dead harvests starts to decrease. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of problems come from insufficient updates.
It's nice and the plot content is good. That is, can there be some ups and downs, but of course don't use knives.
After reading it, there is no obvious poisonous point at present. The combination of knight and immortal is very good. The negative comments from other people are purely malicious negative comments based on personal bias [laughing] Well written, keep up the good work.
I wish you good luck and good luck to the God of Wealth
It's pretty good-looking, come on, please update it more [Please update it more] [Please update it more] [Please update it more]
Good job, don't look at other people's bad comments, after all, everyone has different ideas, right?
I give you five stars for fear of making you proud.