[Self-Insert] Begging for Your Mercy

It's not that great to give you a five-point rating, but it's just because I wrote this, so I give it a five-point rating [sending my heart]

Hmm... How to put it, it may not be in line with the style of the novels I have been exposed to, but it is okay. I just feel that there is a bit too much description of the main character's heart. Personally, I feel that too much description of the main character's heart and reasons will destroy the sense of substitution. However, I did not see any detailed descriptions and names of the appearance. The background is relatively blank and not very detailed, so it is easier to substitute. It is the author's choice to describe the main character or the male protagonist. I respect it. This is just a suggestion. Also, the emotional changes in the second part of the first unit felt a bit stiff (?). The early part of the second unit gave me a kind of behavior that was made to promote the plot. Maybe the connection was not natural enough (?) I still read some, this is just my personal feeling and suggestion, please don't beat me up, okay...

It's a very relaxing little story, and the sense of immersion is quite good. I like some small daily routines🥰. I hope the author will continue to work hard. This is the first time I've seen the characters in the first article. OS really likes this kind of little fool. It reminds me of my little Hei. He is very cute, very loyal and innocent. If you've seen too much Hei, it's OK to look at this fresh and refreshing taste. You can try it 💕

It's very beautiful. Although some of the writing is a little green (but there's nothing wrong with it), I really like the character setting. It's just that there are more XPs, and some of them are rarer. Anyway, I just like it. Anyway, so far, I like all the XPs written by the author🥰. Come on, author, I support you. Don't be anxious about writing. First of all, you must live a good life! Love you😘

I have already tied it (Fanfan~大大), so far I think it is very, very, very good-looking [KISS]! I really like the setting of the male protagonist in the first chapter and the series of story developments! 💕

The character design of the male protagonist and the setting of the story are quite novel and not cliché. I have just watched the two worlds so far, and I still feel that I still have more to say. 😢😢 This boss brother is still too seductive. 💕💕In terms of the sense of immersion, I personally feel that it is quite good. Many details will be left blank, allowing readers to imagine on their own.

It's very good. I feel that every male protagonist is our subordinate. Watching it is exciting and exciting.

Come on, the writing is not that good, and the sense of immersion is average. And in fact, the whole world can take the mother's surname. I have seen many Odai stories set up like this. Anyway, the author only needs to move his fingers casually to do it.

Very delicious, goddess!! I hope I can have a chance to see Master's type😘😘

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking