Re: Wait, You Really Have a Curry Stick?!

After reading ten chapters, I found that the theme of Old Sword is good and the writing style is decent. However, the description of Cai Yueang's character and behavior in the early stage is a bit poisonous. Some of the descriptions give people a feeling of knotted wings. I hope the author has time to modify it, otherwise he will be criticized on male videos.

The dirty soil is reincarnated, and the soul returns

The soul returns and the dirty soil is reincarnated!

It's really curious, ah, no, it's really interesting 😄😄😄

There is room for improvement, but if you keep suppressing your ability, what do you mean? For the sake of the plot between the protagonist and Subaru, I chose an ambiguous part that can only be carried out if the combat power is required, which I don't like (

Damn it, what happened? I haven't read it for a day and all the comments have disappeared.

You must write it down. I will give it five stars first.

I watched part of it, and it's still okay for the time being.

It will be a bit strange to read. The protagonist is Arthur. Why should it be written in the first person of Natsuki Subaru? Although it is still a nanny story, at least it should be from the perspective of the protagonist.

It's okay, but Arthur should have brought the Holy Spear with him. When will he take out the Noble Phantasm to the Star?