A Female Beta Pretending to Be an Alpha: Caught in a Harem Showdown

The writing of this book is quite interesting, and the plot design is particularly good, but there are no adjectives. Except for the plot, the sentence design is relatively bland. It feels like the personalities of all the characters are all presented in the plot. The external performance of the characters is not well reflected, and there is no difference in tone of voice. I just find it quite interesting. The way the characters talk in this book always reminds me of: Well, do it first, and then add it after it's done. I can eat what you cook without getting heartburn. The dialogue method is really very similar. I just wanted to laugh while I was immersed in the plot.

It's rare to see a good-looking movie, and it suits my taste. The heroine is either a big heroine or an ordinary person, but she doesn't lick the hero at all. This is love, hahahaha. Instead, the heroes fall in love with the heroine step by step during the contact with the heroine. The heroine feels a bit honest, but she is not a virgin at all. My impression What's very impressive is that one of the male protagonists stood up for the female protagonist, but the female protagonist didn't say she would forgive the person who bullied him. Instead, she kicked him. One of the male protagonists said that he thought the female protagonist would forgive the person who bullied him, but the female protagonist said that if that was the case, she would backstab the male protagonist who stood up for him. Holy shit, all three views were completely correct, and I immediately got the charm of the female protagonist. It looks good, it looks good, it looks good [licking the screen], the more you read, the more you like it. The author's writing style is very comfortable and has a eloquent feeling. What I like most is the creation of the heroine's character. It doesn't have the feeling of a fast-food-style protagonist who is awesome and makes her dick explode when she appears (now I feel obscene when I read this kind of writing). He has a very correct outlook on life, but also has some charm in his behavior. Among the male protagonists, my favorite is my fiancé Shen Jize. This guy has the attitude of the eldest son and the mistress's mind. On the surface, he looks like I want to break off the engagement with the heroine, but secretly, who is she getting close to? [Licking screen] Jumping like crazy on my xp hahahaha

The four stars are because the heroine always refers to Fu as brother, which is very bad for her senses. I hope it can be changed so that she can call her sister or friend, but not brother. The only protagonist is the heroine. Regardless of this point, this novel is very good-looking, the plot is very exciting, the heroine has a very positive outlook on life, and many Shura scenes are very enjoyable to read.

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh are are really good looking at this. My wife is really good at writing this. My wife is really nice. I like my wife so much. Falling in love with my wife is easy. Falling in love with my wife is as easy as drinking water.

The real book is really good to read 🤤. The author really puts his heart into shaping the personality of the heroine. It is not the so-called golden fingers to mechanically increase the charm. I think this is the most rare thing. It is very rare to dig out the details of an ordinary person. The heroine is not a virgin, not pretentious, and not very caring. Anyone who reads the article seriously will not like the heroine. But what surprised me the most is that the author is also super good at shaping the male protagonist. Although there are some conflicts, the background of the male protagonists is actually very good. And the pulling feeling is so hooking, I can't move up or down, I'm full of joy, the author will update 100,000 words a day, please 🤤 It's really super delicious. It's my favorite beta book at the moment. I highly recommend it and don't miss it [lick screen]. It's been a long time since I came across such a book that suits my appetite. After reading the first three chapters, I know it's a fairy tale. I want to carry the banner for the author. He is a really humble author. He responds sincerely to every book review. There are not many sincere ladies [lick screen]. Come on, the author.

It's nice to watch. It's nice to watch. 🥰🥰🥰 The setting of the heroine particularly poked me. There were some uncomfortable parts in the plot that I thought the heroine didn't care about, but they were brought up later. It made me feel that the heroine is a real person who also has her own emotions. The writing is very good. Recommended [Adour][Adour]🥰

Tied in one go! Oh my god, it's so, so, so beautiful!! Everyone vomited out breakfast, lunch and dinner! Eat this for me!!! The heroine is really super cute!!! The male protagonists also have their own characteristics!!! The interaction was so tense that I twisted into a snake on the bed!!!!!!! So pretty!!! So cute!!! Teacher, can you write a hundred chapters in one hour?!! Wow goddess! My goddess, when the goddess wakes up, the whole world lights up! Bright! This is the power of light! You are my goddess of light! Wow goddess! I adore you so much, goddess, you are my light and my electricity! I'm going to hit a big wall for you! My goddess is heaven! My goddess is the earth! My goddess starts to wake up, which is when the whole world civilization starts to move! Goddess! I adore you so much! I will never give up my love for you! Accept my devout love for you! I declare you! Goddess!

It looks great, not to mention the writing and the plot, but it is very smooth and the rhythm is comfortable. I forgot about the vocabulary because I was watching the event, playing games and listening to books... I have the impression that there are no unfriendly words. The heroine is super good and has a good personality. Although she is average in talent, she works very hard and has found a direction that suits her. She will get better and better in the future // Not a strong female character Several male guests are a bit arrogant, and they always speak coldly and preachyly when facing the female protagonist, but it is okay because they do not harm the female protagonist in any substantial way, and their behavior is also protective of the female protagonist (I did not say that the male guests are very good, I just mean that it is within my acceptance range)

... So far, I think the writing style of this article is okay, and the three views of the emotional line are quite normal, but many words are not used very appropriately, such as "brothers", it is also appropriate to change them to "friends", right? After all, even if the male partner is male, isn't the alpha gender pretended by the heroine still a female alpha? And the heroine is the protagonist! Even if she is not a major heroine, it does not mean that this aspect is not important. I always feel that female channels are particularly uncomfortable with this aspect. Let's look at other things... Those who are interested in this aspect can learn about it first. I haven't seen the author's tendency to make changes in this aspect for the time being. After seeing the author's reply, I will keep following up for updates💪💪

It's very, very beautiful, and the emotional line is very natural. The most important thing is that the author has made the heroine very charming. From the reader's point of view, falling in love with the heroine is effortless. 🥰 🥰 😘