Ming Dynasty: Starting from the Exile in Qiongzhou, the Army Broke Out

It's too long-winded. You have to write down the causes and consequences of every expression of the protagonist, as well as every action. Just like when a farmer is about to upgrade, he needs to write down his food, income, what he can do before the upgrade, what he can do and what his income is after the upgrade, compare the entire Ming army, and then press the production button! After the production is over, write the previous things again, saying that you don't have to worry about it. Seven upgrades, at least fourteen times. This is only twenty chapters.

The subject matter is good. It's badly written, and it's endlessly long-winded. Today's readers don't have the patience to listen to you read the instructions.