Treasure Backpack: Give Sparkling Gardevoir at the Beginning!

The three golden chapters have a smooth rhythm, clear settings, and thoughtful illustrations. They really left a good impression on me. Let's look at the introduction, which is a pure and refreshing little article. It's a pity that the latter part is a bit watered down, but this is not the reason why I deducted one star. Whether intentionally or not, the author has shown signs of pairing up his Pokémon to become fathers and mothers. Whether it is the Fire Dinosaur and Charmander in the past, or the Big Butterfly in the back, they all prove the author's maternal love. I am not a big fan of the Pokémon series. The most personal contact with them is related games, so Pokémon is just a tool to achieve my goal. Of course, they can have their own companions, but they have to find them by themselves, and their priority must not be higher than mine. No matter what, you must first have a regional crown, or you must have a partner. Bai Wen needs to be happy first, right? The control of the rhythm is out of balance, which can be regarded as a point of dissatisfaction.

What reason do you need to look good? The Year of the Dove Holding the Branch The eternal throne of heaven has arrived, and the world has been transformed. Then the True King, the original one, began to wage war against the seven terrifying kings, the masters of the old world. The terrifying kings are dragons. The Original One created His own luminous shadow. And the number of shadows is four. [Phanes, or the original one] The original one may have been Phanes. It has wings and wears a crown. It is born from an egg and it is difficult to distinguish between male and female. But if the world is to be created, the eggshell must be broken. Phanes - the original one - used eggshells to isolate the "universe" and the "microcosm of the world". [More than forty years after holding the branch] Forty winters bury the fire, and forty summers boil the sea. All seven kings were defeated, and all seven kingdoms bowed their heads to heaven. The original king began the creation of heaven and earth. For "us" - its poorest people will appear on this land. … More than four hundred years of holding branches Mountains and rivers were built, and seas and oceans embraced rebels and disobedients. The original One and the Shadow created the birds, the beasts, and the fish. Together they also created flowers, plants and trees. Finally they created man. The number of our ancestors is unknown. From this time on, our ancestors made a covenant with the Original One. The chronology has also changed. [The year when the box boat opened its doors] The Original One has a divine plan for man. As long as people are happy, it will rejoice.

The author can change the introduction of soul travel to reincarnation, otherwise many people who think soul travel is a poisonous point will not click in.

Um, I wrote it myself, so of course I give it a full rating [laughing evilly]

Why didn't the protagonist meet the Phoenix King?

Not bad, good, here you go

It's quite good to integrate the battle ideas of the game.

Come on author, good writing

Come on, ten updates a day.

It looks good, I can write about the evolution of bonds in the future. I'm tired of seeing the original ones, so I'll write about the others. Such as super evolution and so on. You can write about the same thing as bond evolution and mega evolution. But you don't need to write down what props you need, just what you need. If the bond is good enough, you can bond and evolve.