[Honkai: Star Rail Fanfiction + Unhinged Villain + Beautiful but Tragic + System + No CP + Secret Identity + Lots of Personal Headcanons + Apologies for OOC]
When Mu Xia woke up, he found that he had awakened a System.
He also gained an ability to summon the Astral Express and learned that the apocalypse was coming.
Mu Xia was ecstatic. Without a second thought, he went and hacked the enemy who had killed his younger sister to pieces.
After Mu Xia went on a killing spree, the System weakly apologized:
[Sorry, Host. I picked up the wrong script. There is no apocalypse here.]
Mu Xia: ...
Just as he was about to use the train to end his own life, the System added:
[But you can ride the train to other worlds, Host. We're going to become saviors in other worlds.]
Mu Xia had no other choice, so he could only do as the System said.
And so, whenever people in other worlds found themselves in desperate straits, they would see a train glide down from the sky.
The people aboard struck poses and made a stylish entrance.
"With me on the job, how could we possibly lose?"
"Protecting a beautiful girl is my duty!" (March 7th)
"I shall defend the Trailblaze until my very last breath."
Mu Xia stood at the very front, as if he were a god.
"Hello, I'm Fengchun. Need any help?"
But what they didn't know was that the very savior before them was the greatest enemy foretold in their prophecy.
"How about we make a bet? Let's bet on who will die tonight."
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World Script 1: When Life Has Only a Flowering Season Left
World Script 2: Tomorrow, Trapped in Yesterday
World Script 3: How to Kill the Savior
There's nothing interesting about it. To be honest, I don't see a single word "beautiful, strong and miserable", and I don't understand the use of killing Xing. It neither advances the plot nor does it do anything. I don't know what the author thinks. I just feel it is purely disgusting. Besides, buddy, you are a Bengtie fan, even if you want to make an original version, it is too fast... Of course, the above is all based on the reader's perspective. Let me sort out the symptoms for you from the author's perspective. (Preliminary summary: I didn't say that your thoughts and ideas were bad. I just felt that they appeared in places where they shouldn't have appeared, and the methods and methods used felt wrong, resulting in a very poor impression. If you modify it, you may be able to get a much better article instead of what it is now.) 1. The writing style is a little too bad. Whether it is character creation or other aspects, it just feels like people are not human, and the plot is processed very quickly. As a result, when watching the movie, the next big news appeared before I could take a breath after processing the last second of big news. 2. The ideas of character creation and some plot arrangements are a bit anti-human, especially in the first few chapters. Whether it is joining Wumingke or others, it seems that the span is too big. In fact, Dan Heng can directly meet the protagonist after traveling in March, cooperate temporarily, and then join Wumingke, so that Xing does not have to die. 3. As for the use of the plot, if Xing must die, it will be a very good hook. For example, if it is changed to being killed by someone, and the enemy who killed Xing escapes to other universes, and then everyone seeks revenge, in this case, not only the logic is established, but Xing will not die in vain. (The above is my personal opinion. I don't know whether it is right or wrong. In short, if you have any ideas, we can talk about it)
The author must have created this original work too quickly 🤦 There is no clear timeline at the moment. I was confused when I read it... Also, it would be nice if OOC apologized once, it would be a bit ruinous to put it at the end of each chapter.
Kill the star? It's a human, little raccoon, what's wrong with you? He must be tortured to death