Beng Tie: When the Beautiful and Powerful Villain Becomes an Unknown Guest

There's nothing interesting about it. To be honest, I don't see a single word "beautiful, strong and miserable", and I don't understand the use of killing Xing. It neither advances the plot nor does it do anything. I don't know what the author thinks. I just feel it is purely disgusting. Besides, buddy, you are a Bengtie fan, even if you want to make an original version, it is too fast... Of course, the above is all based on the reader's perspective. Let me sort out the symptoms for you from the author's perspective. (Preliminary summary: I didn't say that your thoughts and ideas were bad. I just felt that they appeared in places where they shouldn't have appeared, and the methods and methods used felt wrong, resulting in a very poor impression. If you modify it, you may be able to get a much better article instead of what it is now.) 1. The writing style is a little too bad. Whether it is character creation or other aspects, it just feels like people are not human, and the plot is processed very quickly. As a result, when watching the movie, the next big news appeared before I could take a breath after processing the last second of big news. 2. The ideas of character creation and some plot arrangements are a bit anti-human, especially in the first few chapters. Whether it is joining Wumingke or others, it seems that the span is too big. In fact, Dan Heng can directly meet the protagonist after traveling in March, cooperate temporarily, and then join Wumingke, so that Xing does not have to die. 3. As for the use of the plot, if Xing must die, it will be a very good hook. For example, if it is changed to being killed by someone, and the enemy who killed Xing escapes to other universes, and then everyone seeks revenge, in this case, not only the logic is established, but Xing will not die in vain. (The above is my personal opinion. I don't know whether it is right or wrong. In short, if you have any ideas, we can talk about it)