[System + Transmigration + Vampires + Growth]
This book can broadly be described as an unconventional otherworldly lord story.
The protagonist, Noka, becomes a vampire and awakens a System panel. With an adaptability he acquired from somewhere, he begins life in another world.
In his previous life, he was a medical student. He established himself in a border town using his medical skills.
Later, he becomes a lord, moving between the boundary of darkness and light.
He meets many people and experiences many things. He is a vampire in the sunlight, an outsider from beyond the heavens who imposes his will upon the world...
This kind of vampire and alchemy book is very good, but there are too few. Although the current data is so bleak, it can be regarded as an alternative lord novel. In this case, you can try to write a more hard-core book. I think the protagonist of this book already has this concept of equality and the pursuit of equality. You can deepen this concept and highlight the charm of the protagonist. This way I can follow up a lot, and the writing is pretty good, as bland as water. You gave the protagonist too many hidden dangers in the early stage, leaving people in a constant sense of crisis. This doesn't make the beginning of the story very satisfying, so naturally no one will read it. You will slowly resolve some hidden dangers later, and some hidden dangers will be used as foreshadowing. Make a double line, let the readers feel happy first, and then stay. Talking about worldview shaping and future matters. Don't die, I'm very optimistic about you.
It has definitely been polished with AI. The dialogue is okay and not that weird, but there is a problem with the setting. The protagonist always emphasizes his profession as a doctor. He even wants to bite people and says that because he is a doctor and has no professional training, he cannot bite people... It seems like other professions can bite people casually.
It looks good. I like this theme better. I feel good writing it so far. I hope there will be more updates.
Chapter 3 and 4 repeated
It's good and interesting. It's a rare blood book nowadays.
It's a good book, keep it up slowly