[System + time travel + vampire + growth]
Su Yuan, a hard-working medical student who paid for internships, finally sent it after 36 hours of overtime work.
He came to a different world, was bitten at the beginning, and then hunted, but fortunately he escaped.
His system is just a panel, but fortunately he also has a cheat called "Adaptation".
Relying on what he learned, he established a firm foothold in a border town...
Reader comments
This kind of vampire and alchemy book is very good, but there are too few. Although the current data is so bleak, it can be regarded as an alternative lord novel. In this case, you can try to write a more hard-core book. I think the protagonist of this book already has this concept of equality and the pursuit of equality. You can deepen this concept and highlight the charm of the protagonist. This way I can follow up a lot, and the writing is pretty good, as bland as water. You gave the protagonist too many hidden dangers in the early stage, leaving people in a constant sense of crisis. This doesn't make the beginning of the story very satisfying, so naturally no one will read it. You will slowly resolve some hidden dangers later, and some hidden dangers will be used as foreshadowing. Make a double line, let the readers feel happy first, and then stay. Talking about worldview shaping and future matters. Don't die, I'm very optimistic about you.
Chapter 3 and 4 repeated
It has definitely been polished with AI. The dialogue is okay and not that weird, but there is a problem with the setting. The protagonist always emphasizes his profession as a doctor. He even wants to bite people and says that because he is a doctor and has no professional training, he cannot bite people... It seems like other professions can bite people casually.
It looks good. I like this theme better. I feel good writing it so far. I hope there will be more updates.
This kind of vampire and alchemy book is very good, but there are too few. Although the current data is so bleak, it can be regarded as an alternative lord novel. In this case, you can try to write a more hard-core book. I think the protagonist of this book already has this concept of equality and the pursuit of equality. You can deepen this concept and highlight the charm of the protagonist. This way I can follow up a lot, and the writing is pretty good, as bland as water. You gave the protagonist too many hidden dangers in the early stage, leaving people in a constant sense of crisis. This doesn't make the beginning of the story very satisfying, so naturally no one will read it. You will slowly resolve some hidden dangers later, and some hidden dangers will be used as foreshadowing. Make a double line, let the readers feel happy first, and then stay. Talking about worldview shaping and future matters. Don't die, I'm very optimistic about you.
Chapter 3 and 4 repeated
It has definitely been polished with AI. The dialogue is okay and not that weird, but there is a problem with the setting. The protagonist always emphasizes his profession as a doctor. He even wants to bite people and says that because he is a doctor and has no professional training, he cannot bite people... It seems like other professions can bite people casually.
It looks good. I like this theme better. I feel good writing it so far. I hope there will be more updates.
It's a good book, keep it up slowly