Junior Brother, Can't We Spend More Than Ten Breaths on Our Wedding Night?
师弟，咱洞房也不能超过十息吗？
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 203k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Fantasy High-Concept
- Updated
- 1d ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
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This book is worth 8.0. Let's talk about the advantages first. The author's grasp of the rhythm is very good. There is a feeling that the protagonist's rhythm is very fast but the rhythm of the external environment is normal, so the external environment delays the protagonist's rhythm. This way of writing is more realistic. Another disadvantage is that the characters except the protagonist have no soul. The theme and rhythm setting are very interesting, but it cannot be read as a meaningful book. So this book is 8.0 In my heart, not one point more and not one point less.
The pacing is okay, the details can be polished more, the plot is pretty smooth in the front, but I wonder if the combat power will collapse in the later stage😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
You've already written a book, but you're always opening up new holes 🤦
Very good book, faster and faster
I think it was well written, but at the beginning, the description was a bit thin, but I felt that the flow was too little.
It feels like there are multiple female protagonists. Although the front is poisonous, I can barely watch it 🤔
The subject matter is quite new and I can still read it. Updates are a problem.
Putting aside some issues, this article does have some highlights. However, the pace of the book is very fast and it is a bit hard to read.
Simple, refreshing, non-toxic and rare
The story of Shi Jue Ti's hard work in cultivation