COD Beta: A Kite in the Palm of Your Hand

I must give it five stars to praise the author for his perfect depiction of the details of the characters!! The character of the heroine is very immersive, not just the external appearance, but the details of life, including the details of illness, the writing is great! If I think there's something wrong with it, I guess it's foreshadowing based on the title. It's not a sadistic one, but it's not easy either. A few soldiers secretly poked and felt that there was a conspiracy, but fortunately they didn't press hard on the heroine. The plot of the heroine not being able to go back is logical to me. In fact, it feels like a few soldiers are chasing and blocking the heroine, leaving the heroine behind. I have a little personal quirk. I don't know how the heroine will accept the soldiers later. I feel it's a bit hard to fall in love with her now. I'm in a crazy fight. (I know it's an otome, but I'm not used to it. The heroine YN is the same to me, and I can relate to it. The sense of involvement does not depend on brainwashing myself, but also on whether the author's portrayal of the characters is good or not. So my comment is still about the heroine, who eats a lot of food, and doesn't like to embarrass herself.)

It's a good read. It's finally a story where everyone is normal. Even the obscure condition is clearly stated. It's not a deception. There is no plot to abuse women. The soldiers' personalities are very compatible. Finally, the soldiers are not perverts [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]

This is a novel that does not deprive YN of proof of his existence. The other military novels are about YN in a parallel time and space, where he lost everything he owned, including his family and friends. A thorough exploitation of Y N. But this is a great story. You can also call your mother. The plot and YN's character are very reasonable. I don't know these soldiers, and I don't want these soldiers to fall in love. The writing is really beautiful, so I look forward to the following plots. Come on👏

I think this article is very well written. Although the length is very short, it has everything it needs. The character of each person is vividly reflected in every detail. It is not exaggerated, nor is it divorced from the character's background to make up the word count. Konig is not a stupid person. As a "social phobia", I think it is normal for the length and dialogue to be short. Roast squab is not romantic at all, just a bit playful. Ghost and Kee also fit the character very well. After reading it, I felt very warm, like a warm current flowing in my heart. My persistence in going home supported me all the way. This article is not like other articles of this type, although other teachers may write more cruelly in order to be more in line with reality. The respect and gentleness of the soldiers in this book may be the reason why I really fell in love with it, rather than the long-term relationship with me after infringing on me and taming me (of course, some big and round novels of this type are still very good, and I can still accept it). They were not like wild beasts. During the watching process, although they had a little bit of paranoia in their bones, they took some measures to make me prepare to stay, but in the end they gave up and fulfilled my wish and sent me home. At the end of the story, I returned home. Whether I come back or not is an open ending. The initiative is in my hands. It is not considered a happy ending. But the teacher's article is really a bit short. I think the emotional lines between me and the soldiers are a bit lacking. Most of them are just plot lines. I hope you can write better and better as you write. And yn does not appear in the whole text. If I remember correctly, this makes people feel very immersive.

Tied, chapter 45, the author's writing is smooth and delicate, the rhythm is slow but logical, and the interactions with the soldiers so far are only undercurrents full of oriental aesthetics. It is not a simple and crude way of serving meat on the table, but the kind of X tension flowing in the air. I like it! Give me a five-star review first, cheers for the author! After reading it, I felt that the overall review was too short and bland, so I deducted 2 stars.

Probably A story about a beast fighting in the battlefield, picking up a white dove caught in a trap, and trying every means to bring the white dove back to its nest. It has an open ending. Although the beasts let the dove return home in the end, but after seeing the outside world and being captured by the beasts' dragnet, whether the white dove is willing to come out of the nest again is a matter of opinion.

The content of the work is smooth and reasonable. There are one or two twists and turns that are a bit abrupt (like faults), but they do not affect the perception. The interaction between YN and the soldiers is handled very reasonably, staying at the ambiguous stage where both parties have a good impression of each other. There is no excessive industrial saccharine. This step-by-step approach is very real and down-to-earth. This approach is more realistic. Overall, it is highly recommended and has a five-star rating!

It's nice to read, and it's well written. The characters are all very good. There's no plot to abuse women. The description of soldiers is also very good. K's mother is too sinister. Why do you mean I got up an hour and a half late and had to practice for three hours? [Smile]. Teacher, you must update more 💕 💕 💕. The last one who updated 100 chapters in one night was already on the Forbes list.

The writing is very good and the logic is smooth. I personally think the description of the characters of Ghost Keegan Krueger and Konig is very good!

Is there really no follow-up or extra story, teacher! It's so well written. It's not the kind of plot where you fall hopelessly in love with the soldiers as soon as you meet them, and I also take a liking to them at a glance. It's the kind of story where you slowly fall in love with each other. It's a great short story!