A Max-Level Expert's Retirement Life in Terra

I just want to give you a useful suggestion. You can let the protagonist tell the children stories about how the Emperor killed the Void Dragon with a stone. Then collect the reactions of these stories and write them into the article. It will be perfect. Of course, it should not be too long. It is best for a story not to exceed one to two chapters. If you want to say a longer story, I don't care. For example, a shorter story. Just keep this rhythm, quickly increase the word count, and then go directly to the book test. The flavor of AI is very strong. I don't think it's wrong to use biological intelligence, but I suggest you polish it. Characters who can get along with Warhammer and Huangpizi have their own characteristics. Moreover, your character's time and place are marked out for a short period of time in the beginning, which is very artificial. You might as well add some special ones. Change it directly to . At approximately the time and place, the protagonist goes directly to that place. Instead of time and place, what is the protagonist doing? It feels very stiff.

There are two bugs. One is that there are very few firearms on Terra. In the integrated movement, there are no monsters with guns at all in the game. Even in Colombia, which produces guns, there are very few people with guns. They are basically crossbows. The other is that there are only blunderbuss and "guns" on Terra. There is no such thing as firearms, and blunderbuss The essence of it is still a kind of staff, but it turns the diffused energy into directed energy to push the projectile forward, which means that this thing does not have the mechanism of a traditional firearm (travel time is not included, the first phase of R6 time travel also said that Terra cannot make gunpowder, God knows how they replenish ammunition)

It's okay, but I hope the author knows more about war hammers and psychic powers. The psychic powers that can reach the level of being able to elbow four vendors are basically omnipotent. It's basically possible to go back in time and resurrect 🍉 🍉 🍉

Unfortunately, Lin Xu can no longer return to Blue Star to change the fact that there are 42 million kangaroos in Australia and only 3 million in Jamaica. This means if kangaroos invaded Jamaica, each person would have to fight 14 kangaroos

A suggestion for the monks who want to read this book. If you don't like the harem, you don't have to read it. If you can accept it, this book is a good story about traveling through Terra. The writing is okay. I like to read this kind of boss who is so invincible that he can repair all regrets. However, I always feel that writing a harem with a war hammer is weird.

Friends who like Warhammer and Arknights can click in and take a look, Double Chef is ecstatic

Not to mention much, there is not much about this subject matter, and it is well written, comfortable to read, and well received!

Okay, okay, I found a little plot (abstract) in a lot of memes, but come on, author, this book is still very suitable for me 🤭

I hope it can be updated at a fixed time. It's really good. Please give the author more chapters!

The relationship is progressing a bit quickly, but it's just a second time, so why do you care so much? So exciting