I Just Want a Proper Western Fantasy Adventure

The plot arranged by the author is okay. Compared with other systems, the progress of the plug-in book is a bit slow. However, fortunately, the characters described have very distinctive personalities. It is not like other books where you only know their names but not their people. I have read Chapter 48 so far. I personally feel that the witcher-style detective plot of Fierna's soul is very interesting (those who have played The Witcher 3 should understand), and the plot is well laid out. The commissions I saw when I first came to the city, encountering ghosts when renting a house, ghosts killing people, investigating the case, and revealing the mystery step by step are quite charming. Of course, after seeing that Fierna seems to have started a relationship in the plot, I can basically guess and understand it, but this does not hinder the advancement of the plot. The author sets up the suspense very well. At the same time, there are also foreshadowing settings for cult rituals, and the subsequent recovery of hooks that are separated from the guide. I feel that there will be a big wave in the town later. The author has a corresponding obsession with the arrangement of each character. There are traces of why he died and why he separated, so that he will not escape. I hope the author can keep writing. It doesn't matter if the upgrade progress is slower. It would be great if the plot can maintain the current level. If the follow-up plot can include more witcher detective plots, and if it is interesting enough, it will definitely make the book stand out. Of course, the author can use it freely. The above is purely my personal opinion, and I will continue to follow it in the future. Come on, author😘 I read about Chapter 62 in the morning, and I really like the protagonist's decryption reasoning in the tomb (similar to the teleportation puzzle in the plot of The Witcher and Keira in the Elf Cave). The protagonist in the book is different from other books. When encountering problems, he is not the kind of invincible man who simply defeats ten with one force. What is rare is a character with obvious intelligence and logic😳. At present, the growth rewards given to the protagonist in the plot before Chapter 60 are indeed very restrained or scarce😅. They mainly focus on the experience of adventure and the mastery of the world view. After all, the character is a flesh-traveling character with no experience in another world. He is still in the countryside when he first arrives in flesh-traveling (lack of information circulation). However, the author has provided some attribute props to enhance the character (such as badges or blessings, etc.). Personally, I feel that the author can learn from other books (I have an Adventurer's Guide and the like) to improve the character, because upgrading does not necessarily mean an increase in attribute points, it can also be an update of major equipment, the awakening of a certain trait, or an unexpected improvement from a rare magic potion (in the book, there is buying a scabbard for the sword, and changing protective gear, etc., But it is more restrained). But in the final analysis, after so many chapters, the protagonist is still an unadvanced adventurer. Maybe most people can't accept the novel's uncertainty about the world's power system where the character lives, or the lack of certainty about who the character can defeat now, because the ones who have been fighting in the plot before are Goblins and Goblins (the iteration of monster types is also relatively slow). Of course, there are advantages to slowness, and careful polishing also brings flavor. For example, the character's diet is very meticulous. To put it bluntly, I am more selective about readers🤭. From the plot point of view, the author intends to make the character look like a witcher (personal guess), so will the activation of the witcher necklace be a prop to enhance the character's strength? Can some design be done on it? 🤔As for the rewards for the detective plot, the current plot is basically like a small branch plot, so it is right that the rewards should be small. So can it be introduced into the main plot (for example, the city lord's house becomes haunted and the protagonist investigates it, or investigates a cult, such as the king's daughter in The Witcher 3 turning into a vampire succubus), and then the rewards can be generous. If you want gold coins, there will be gold coins, and if you want legendary props, there will be legendary props. The above are purely personal thoughts, the author can write whatever he wants💕, come on!

It's quite good to read. This book has a lot of feelings about eating. The eating is not complicated, and the writing is not very detailed. But when you read it, you can really feel the protagonist's satisfaction, and it took over my emotions quite well. The treatment of some characters is quite in line with my taste. When the hotel owner told a story about the past, he said that the plants in the fields are eaten by people, and the ones there can eat people. The atmosphere of this sentence makes people think that he is a person who has worked in the fields. If only this sentence is used to establish his character, it will make people think that the author is very pretentious, and it will make people feel alienated. The death of the dwarf teammates at the beginning was very simple, but the life story before the war was also very simple. Halfway through the story, the flags were flying. I thought it would be an embarrassing memory kill at the beginning, but it turned out not to be too sensational, but it made people remember this episode. Of course, in order to have this kind of experience, you must first feel that the author is telling a story. Otherwise, if you don't feel immersed in it, the author will just entertain himself while watching it. It would be torture if you didn't finish reading some of the previous memories. Not much is shown in terms of combat, but the upgrades are a bit slow, and it looks like it takes a long time to come up with something like a part-time job in Stormwind City. Although there are not many books about adventures like this, I have seen a few in the past few years, and they usually turn into upgrades and monsters after one or two hundred chapters. However, authors who write about upgrades and monsters generally do not look good and have a good grasp of the rhythm (either they do not know how to write upgrades or they are too fragmented and cannot accept it).

A traditional Western fantasy work that is above average and above average. The protagonist's cheat sheet system is not a super model. It can only check its own attributes and identify special items. The overall rhythm is relaxed and relaxed, and the character's growth curve is natural and reasonable. There are no deus ex machina or excessive tricks that can easily cause drama. The fly in the ointment lies in the description of battles: the author prefers to use daily episodic narratives to deal with battle scenes, with a slow pace and weak picture coherence. It often requires three or four sentences of explanatory text to switch to the next battle scene. In addition, the numerical setting of the golden finger on the panel weakens the realistic texture valued in traditional Western fantasy to a certain extent, and moves closer to the numerical sense of the game text, but this is a matter of opinion. Incidentally: After all, the title of this book claims to be a "pure" Western fantasy adventure, so I reviewed it based on the standards of pure traditional Western fantasy. For traditional Western fantasy that claims to be "pure", the panel system is a flaw that conflicts with the self-positioning of the work. In addition, the evaluation of writing style may vary from person to person.

At first glance, there are no questions that can't help but be asked. The characters' actions are logical, the writing techniques are skillful, and the prose is interesting. It's a pity that I don't like reading this genre. It would be great if the kind I like also has writing styles like yours. The processing method is too rough, what about the classic method of suppressing first and then increasing? When you first mention the motive for the crime, do you assume that the readers have just finished watching "Dora the Adventures"? Although the other way of writing is that you can guess the follow-up in one second, but the atmosphere, the atmosphere, whichever atmosphere you want, you have completely ruined the atmosphere by writing like this, 3 stars

There are so many books about Tomato, so I have to think of some ways to quickly screen and quickly test the poison. Mainly through the character's speech, behavior and the charm of the writing, you can predict whether the degree of praise and content are suitable for you. If it suits you, it is a good book. After reading six chapters, there is a high probability that I have found another good book. I rummaged further back and found a battle. It was very good, so I decided to read it. I have read more than ten chapters. Overall, the writing is very good. The characters have their own characteristics. The battle descriptions are exciting but not draggy. The growth of the protagonist is exciting and exciting... But there are also some scenes that are more cliché, such as at the end of Chapter 7, "The captain suddenly pointed an arrow at the protagonist and released it. It turned out that there was an enemy behind the protagonist."; At the end of Chapter 11, "The three of them were happily cleaning the battlefield, and it took them a long time to realize that the fourth person was missing." The former is a cheap twist, and the latter is a cheap suspense. It is not a poisonous point, but it has been used in film and television dramas for hundreds of years. It has become cliché and itself is not very reasonable. But it can be seen that this book has potential, and it will become more exciting as the author's skills deepen. However, it doesn't suit my personal taste for the time being, so I won't pursue it.

Yes, but it can be expected that with such a theme and trend, there will definitely not be much discussion in the short term, but I hope the author can persevere. Only by writing such a novel long enough can it develop its depth and attract enough readers.

Does the author have a female protagonist?

This author's description of the environment is very interesting. I am currently suspecting that it is a fairy grass. I will keep it on my bookshelf to see what happens next.

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