Hiding Inside Luffy, the One Piece Veteran Leaves the Five Elders in a Panic
海贼苟在路飞体内，五老星人麻了
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- Ongoing
- Length
- 432k Words
- Genre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 1d ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
Other names
- 海贼：穿成老爷爷，住在路飞体内Alternate title on Fanqie
202Chapters
22.4kReads
6.3Score
2.3kShelves
8.4kListens
54.4kReads · all time
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It's so beautiful🥺Men are menstruating🙄Women are crazy when they see it💪This is the nemesis of depression😎It's the alarm clock of vegetative pictures😭It's so cute that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River😱So handsome😘 It's God and it's my rose that illuminates my dark life and makes my world map meaningful😊I run, I jump, I dance the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor😮It makes me realize that God does exist and I'm so cute The tears won't stop and the world will no longer be short of water. The nemesis of depression 😋 is the alarm clock for vegetative people 😨 It's so cute that the tears flow out of the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River 😈 It's so beautiful 🥰 God is my rose, it lights up my dark life and makes my world meaningful 😙 I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor 😎 It made me realize that God does exist, I was so good that my tears did not stop, and the world no longer lacked water.
[Voice input + hand rubbing] [Eat with confidence] [The plot is all original] [The writing is average, don't blame me]
The pace is very fast, very refreshing, not watery, and there are no redundant words at all. However, it lacks too many emotional portrayals and details of the original work, but it looks good. Overall, the shortcomings do not hide the good points.
There are some things that are wrong. For example, when he first met Chopper, he fought Valpo. At that time, Chopper didn't know the other people's names, so he called Usopp. Also, Nami only used the weather stick for the first time in Alabasta, but before Baroque was used here, there was information that Nami fought by using weather. There are some fragmentary things that I forgot.
Seeing that the comments section is full of five stars, let's give it a five star first. Having said that, the protagonist is considered a soul body. Do you want to give him the ability to see the true form of the Devil Fruit? When the time comes, you can transfer the Devil Fruit's abilities to others.
It's average, but the pace is not slow. The author said that the writing is average, and the author didn't lie. The fast pace covers up some shortcomings, and it's still watchable.
I am very satisfied with this book
It's okay so far, but as an old man living in the body, it makes sense for Luffy to come out and fight for him after he's unconscious [laughter]
Theoretically, Luffy can eat two fruits. The protagonist's soul is in Luffy's body. 😏
It's pretty cool. I've been following it for a while.