[Doomsday+Goldfinger+Jie Hu+Multiple heroines+Relaxing and refreshing writing+Fan]
Traveling through the end of the book, encountering the sinister original male protagonist at the beginning? Chu Feng: Don't panic, blackmail him first!
Holding the [Crimson Moon Source Seal] in hand and knowing all the plot trends, Chu Feng embarked on a doomsday journey like a dimensionality reduction strike.
Convoy route? I'll lead the way!
Weird weakness? I broke the news!
The golden finger that the original male protagonist Chen Ye was proud of was vulnerable to Chu Feng's information gap.
Not only that, the pink-haired girl's arrogance, Xu Lina's dependence, Lin Qingge's coldness, Jiang Rou's gentleness... The flowers of the high mountains in the original work were all captured by Chu Feng.
When strange things invade and humanity is on the verge of despair, the man who was once despised by everyone is leading his confidantes to save the world like a god!
Tribute: "Sequential Highway: Don't be left behind!"
Reader comments
There are no big problems with this book so far. First of all, if the protagonist doesn't have a system, why don't he use it? Has it disappeared? He has been digging holes in Chen Ye's system. He can't just dig holes without filling them. As long as his system is better than his, he can collect some promotion materials appropriately. Cooperation is a win-win situation. Later, he will system Turn on the system, create a regular sequence of time and space, and use it with the growth-type strange objects space-time sword, space-time ring (vegetables and fruits are planted in it), and the vehicle space-time chariot. It can fight and prevent battery life, and running away is no problem. Later, you can use the vegetables and fruits you grow to exchange for other strange and strange objects in proportion. , The system has extra killing points, you can exchange them for a few bottles of random awakening sequence injections, and exchange them with the internal team members for a ratio of rare items. This forms a closed-loop operation, so I suggest that the author can refer to it like this.
I hope I can save Uncle Bao. It's a pity that he was in the original plot. I like the fighting plot very much. It's pretty normal for you to be with a girl now. You have multiple female protagonists. Your emotions are quite normal at the moment. The relationship scenes are not forced. I don't think there are any surprises. I hope to continue to add more fighting plots. I like to watch the upgrade stream [Chigua] [Like]
I'm glad to see the fanfic, but some places are really not carefully written. For example, the big scissors ✂️✂️✂️ of the second-level weird girl in Xinghua Town have not been cut. It is introduced later that this is a strange object.
Keep reading, that book is too heavy-handed, and it's too uncomfortable to read, but I suggest you pay attention to the pace. His original work was a bit slow. If you write it like this now, I feel like you will catch up with him very soon. The two to three million words, I feel that you have caught up with him with five or six hundred thousand words. It feels a bit too fast! ! !
As for the emotional scenes, it's the end of the world, so try not to be so gross.
It's still pretty good, but it's too short. Can you publish it even if it's so short? You should at least publish it with more than 100,000 words.
Overall, it's pretty good-looking and not toxic at all. I'll update it soon.
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Very nice, update soon
Okay, keep going.
It looks good, update quickly, update quickly, update quickly
Please update more, 10,000 words a day is about the same
It's quite interesting, he is actually a fan of Noko, come on
I've only read less than ten chapters☆Not bad, not bad [laughing] At least I feel good☆Come on＾0＾~I'll try my best to give you power every day with love [laughing]
Okay, very beautiful
The plot is okay, you can watch it
I think Jiang Rou will take it back later, I like Jiang Rou more [laughing evilly]
Chen Ye is the younger brother, five-star praise!
It's rare to see a fellow Yezi person. Support
Love to watch, update, update
I feel like you won't last long,
I hope to continue updating and writing. When will the protagonist's system be released? The one who is not the original protagonist is the one you wrote. What system is he in? What functions does it have?
I've always wanted to read the fanfic of this book
Come on, come on, come on, go, go, go, go, duck
Collect first, speed up, wait for your 200,000 words, I will read it
Where is the heroine? Chapter 50 is still a monk, and the progress is much faster than the original work [face covering]
I just watched it and I think the adaptation is quite interesting.
Don't get him a vehicle, otherwise it will be difficult for him to run away when the time comes.
Come on, I hope I can write it to the end. It's a million words. It's recommended to add a little more emotional scenes. It doesn't have to be too many. The most important thing is that I hope it can be updated all the time and it's a million words [Adoration].
There are no big problems with this book so far. First of all, if the protagonist doesn't have a system, why don't he use it? Has it disappeared? He has been digging holes in Chen Ye's system. He can't just dig holes without filling them. As long as his system is better than his, he can collect some promotion materials appropriately. Cooperation is a win-win situation. Later, he will system Turn on the system, create a regular sequence of time and space, and use it with the growth-type strange objects space-time sword, space-time ring (vegetables and fruits are planted in it), and the vehicle space-time chariot. It can fight and prevent battery life, and running away is no problem. Later, you can use the vegetables and fruits you grow to exchange for other strange and strange objects in proportion. , The system has extra killing points, you can exchange them for a few bottles of random awakening sequence injections, and exchange them with the internal team members for a ratio of rare items. This forms a closed-loop operation, so I suggest that the author can refer to it like this.
I hope I can save Uncle Bao. It's a pity that he was in the original plot. I like the fighting plot very much. It's pretty normal for you to be with a girl now. You have multiple female protagonists. Your emotions are quite normal at the moment. The relationship scenes are not forced. I don't think there are any surprises. I hope to continue to add more fighting plots. I like to watch the upgrade stream [Chigua] [Like]
I'm glad to see the fanfic, but some places are really not carefully written. For example, the big scissors ✂️✂️✂️ of the second-level weird girl in Xinghua Town have not been cut. It is introduced later that this is a strange object.
Keep reading, that book is too heavy-handed, and it's too uncomfortable to read, but I suggest you pay attention to the pace. His original work was a bit slow. If you write it like this now, I feel like you will catch up with him very soon. The two to three million words, I feel that you have caught up with him with five or six hundred thousand words. It feels a bit too fast! ! ! As for the emotional scenes, it's the end of the world, so try not to be so gross.
It's still pretty good, but it's too short. Can you publish it even if it's so short? You should at least publish it with more than 100,000 words. Overall, it's pretty good-looking and not toxic at all. I'll update it soon.
I love it so much [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss]
Very nice, update soon
Okay, keep going.
It looks good, update quickly, update quickly, update quickly
Please update more, 10,000 words a day is about the same
It's quite interesting, he is actually a fan of Noko, come on
I've only read less than ten chapters☆Not bad, not bad [laughing] At least I feel good☆Come on＾0＾~I'll try my best to give you power every day with love [laughing]
Okay, very beautiful
The plot is okay, you can watch it
I think Jiang Rou will take it back later, I like Jiang Rou more [laughing evilly]
Chen Ye is the younger brother, five-star praise!
It's rare to see a fellow Yezi person. Support
Love to watch, update, update
I feel like you won't last long,
I hope to continue updating and writing. When will the protagonist's system be released? The one who is not the original protagonist is the one you wrote. What system is he in? What functions does it have?
I've always wanted to read the fanfic of this book
Come on, come on, come on, go, go, go, go, duck
Collect first, speed up, wait for your 200,000 words, I will read it Where is the heroine? Chapter 50 is still a monk, and the progress is much faster than the original work [face covering]
I just watched it and I think the adaptation is quite interesting.
Don't get him a vehicle, otherwise it will be difficult for him to run away when the time comes.
Come on, I hope I can write it to the end. It's a million words. It's recommended to add a little more emotional scenes. It doesn't have to be too many. The most important thing is that I hope it can be updated all the time and it's a million words [Adoration].