Even After Reincarnating, My Hero Classmate Still Won't Leave Me Alone

This is my first book from a self-proclaimed author to an audience willing to praise and praise it, and it is also my debut novel. The story itself is a fantasy campus love harem comedy that takes place in a different world and reverses time travel. I will try my best to write this story well and make everyone happy to read it!

After reading it for a while, around Chapter 20, I made some comments. The character of the hero is too strong (derogatory), and the description uses obviously more words, and the male protagonist shows a more honest and responsible character. The result is that in my opinion, the male protagonist is in a position of being pressured at all times and always tolerating. The male protagonist was stabbed through the heart by a brave man in the original world, and his normal life in this world was destroyed because of the brave man. The male protagonist was still in trouble and had to wipe his ass. From what I've seen so far, the image of the hero is already very biased towards the type of the heartless giant baby (a bit ugly, but that's what it means), and the male protagonist, the theoretical enemy, has to keep her in the dark. The character of the brave man definitely belongs to the suppressive part in "Yu Yang Xian Yi Yi". I don't know if the author has any intention to change the image, or just write it as usual. Generally speaking, the aggressive image of the hero in these twenty chapters should be a relatively big point of controversy.

Generally speaking, this book has good potential. First of all, I didn't find any bad points in the characters of the heroines. Although it is a debut novel, I feel that the writing is already pretty good after more than ten chapters. The personality characteristics of each character are also relatively complete. In fact, it is already good for a light novel to have these features🤔 But I think there are still some flaws, such as the character of the male protagonist. Although the previous life was in a bad state, compared with other female protagonists, I still think that the image and character of the male protagonist need to be described more deeply. Secondly, some plot changes are also quite abrupt, that is, there is no middle transition, which will give people a feeling of writing which one comes to mind (bushi) But overall, it's harmless. In my mind, this is still a light novel that can get close to 9 points. If you are looking for a light and interesting novel, I think you can give it a try. In terms of Tomato's current situation, this one is already very good. (I'm so angry. Why can't I count the time for offline reading? Why can't I count the time for listening to books? Why will the time be lost when I switch accounts? 😢😢)

I think this book is very interesting, with delicate emotions, but sometimes the logic is a bit poor. Many things happen suddenly without much foreshadowing, and there is a suspicion of deliberately promoting the plot. However, the overall shortcomings are not concealed. The male and female protagonists are very likable. Overall, it is a very good book. My suggestion to the author is that when solving problems, the protagonist does not have to bear the responsibility alone. Although I know that I want to highlight the personality charm of the protagonist, it is not good to always choose to sacrifice the protagonist, but I will always support this book.

I pray that the spirit of wisdom surges like gray mist, allowing Audrey's insight, Alger's voyage, and Daly's ravings to appear on the page again. King of Yellow and Black, the master of good luck, please give the storm of inspiration to your ghostwriter, let the stagnant pendulum swing again, and let the unfinished epic continue to write chapters. I praise you, and I implore you—to give a gentle push to the hand holding the pen. May the new chapter come in time!

I picked this up from the y bar to show my support. Personally, I don't like Shura field and yandere type novels. I can accept other novels except fc and nymphomaniac. I haven't read any books recently, so I just happened to read this one. Come on, meow

It is a masterpiece. The female protagonists such as Wen Shiyun and Luo Yingying are very vivid in their characterizations. The male protagonists also have good emotional intelligence and personality. The emotional scenes are on point and the plot is not too bland. It can be seen that it was written with care. I think last 9.2 Will not be a problem

I finished reading it in one night, and it's still very good. I haven't found any poisonous points after reading it. It's very good. I haven't found such a good book on Tomato for a long time. And it doesn't have a knife. It's daily leisure with a little bit of otherworldly elements. It's also very sweet. It looks beautiful to me. The heroine also accepted them all. This one is particularly praised. There is no Shura field and no fighting. I like to read this kind of sweet article. Come on, keep writing. I love to write sweet articles.

Can death be so cheap in a novel? In the previous life, the hero killed the protagonist. Now the protagonist's life is stable and he meets Amomum villosum in modern times. After the protagonist determines that the hero has no strength, he doesn't trick the hero into going to jail. At the very least, he ignores this fool and continues his modern life. You can change the name to "About me falling in love with Shashi, my brave man". Got swallowed for comment again

A particularly excellent book, the emotional line is very delicate, but the author is too short and not enough to read.