Transmigrating into a Comic, I Was Forced to Become the Savior to Stay Alive

The overall plot arrangement is good. The best batch of female videos I have ever seen Advantages: 1. The dual-line narrative of the main body and the avatar completes the perspective, which is better than a simple narrative narrative. 2. The plot advancement is quite reasonable, and the characters are rich in emotions. 3. The characters have their own little memories, which enriches the character creation and makes the overall look and feel very full. Disadvantages: 1. The system adopts a punishment mechanism for the protagonist's tasks. The setting of "obliterate mission failure" with a knife on the protagonist's neck is really jarring. If you encounter a straight-tempered person, the system will explode. 2. The scene is written too directly. Even if it is written as a passive scene such as unintentional physical contact, it is better than an active idea.

Oh, oh, oh, the writing style of this Western fantasy novel makes me so thirsty. . . I have finished reading the current content seriously in one night🥰Brother, keep up the good work, I will seriously start to catch up on updates📚🐀(Put Boss's book into the bookshelf)

Although I haven't read it for a long time, the logic of these chapters is very good, and the author's writing style is also relatively good. I haven't read this kind of Western fantasy novel for a long time. I like it very much, but I prefer the main plot. The protagonist also slowly grows through some experiences, and the character design is also rich. Full, I feel very good. If the author's outline is well organized, the traffic of this book in the later period should be very good (it's just my opinion, but I also hope there will be traffic). The author can continue to work hard, the plot is very good (❁´◡`❁)*✲ﾟ*

It feels very good to read, the rhythm is well grasped, and the story line is quite good. However, it feels that the protagonist is mostly pushed. At present, there are too few clues for him. It may be that there are still more than 10 chapters left. The subjective initiative of the protagonist is not very strong, and the protagonist's feelings are a bit like coming and going quickly. What I like is that the supporting characters have their own ideas and the protagonist also has his own friends. The current major trend of supporting characters has become flat and fake, and the author's writing is also very logical👍

I am a layman, and I don't have many beautiful words to praise this novel. I think the setting of this novel is more attractive to me. The protagonist's system is closely related to the Loom of Destiny. As the protagonist's first vest, the Karl who appears is a puppet given to the protagonist by the system, and Karl's eyes have the holy symbol of the Loom of Destiny. Because it is a new book, I don't know much background information, but I am personally very interested in the setting of gods. This article has a lot of foreshadowing, and the plot looks relatively tight. In terms of the emotional line, because I don't know whether the author plans to write a long novel or a short story, my evaluation of the emotional line is that the emotional development is relatively fast, and it seems that the author always wants to write a short story. The plot is tight and the pace is fast, but it is recommended to work slowly on the emotional line. As long as the author is not writing a novel that is completed in about 100,000 words, the emotional aspect should be smoother.

The world view is very interesting, and the character setting of the protagonist really impressed me. Both the vest and the main body have a strong sense of existence. However, the previous part of the plot feels a bit depressing, which makes me, a lover of happy reunion portraits, a bit uncomfortable. I look forward to a reversal in the future. Although the introduction says that there are not many emotional lines, but they are all very easy to digest, but they are a bit short and not enough to eat (knock on the bowl, try to hint). So far, it is a very delicious meal 😘

It's very beautiful. The setting is very interesting and novel. I really like this kind of steampunk western fantasy theme. The plot is compact and looks very enjoyable. I feel that the author's writing is very powerful and the writing is very good. Is it possible to update ten chapters in one day? It's not enough😢😢

Like it very much! I read it in two accounts, so the reading time on this account is shorter (இωஇ). It's not because I didn't read it carefully! It is my favorite Western fantasy theme. The plot is very innovative and the Loom of Destiny is so cool... And the main characters currently appearing have their own charms and highlights. I feel really comfortable watching it... Big boost to the author! I will continue to watch!

I rarely read Western fantasy novels, but the author's writing is really great ദ്ദി◝ ⩊ ◜.ᐟ

It's a very interesting western fantasy time travel novel. It has a lot of foreshadowing in the early stage and the plot is compact. However, it is now a serialized novel and it is not enjoyable enough 😢