[Multiple female protagonists + male protagonist center]
Opening and closing his eyes, Peter came to the game he often played and became the male villain with the same name.
At this time, after he had done something bad, he was being blocked in the corner by the heroine.
"Peter Griffin, in the freshman challenge in half a month, I will defeat you openly in front of everyone!"
What should I do? Recalling the tragic situation of the villain in the plot, giving in now is the best choice, right?
But looking at that arrogant pink-haired face - give in? That's too boring
So he stepped forward and patted the heroine's face
"Don't let me look forward to it too much."
Reader comments
Current thoughts:
The genius swordsman girl Tokyo Arnold, Peter who was violated by the glory of humanity, the gravity-based weapon master and the cool girl, the tsundere villain Lucifer (
Are you sure the book cover was not generated by Griffin peterAI?
Good looking
The main character has a mouth and is flirtatious from time to time (regardless of gender). His character is the best in the books I have read, and it will change.
The most important thing is that the author's self-made character designs are very appropriate.
Finally, I hope the author can update more at once and the quality is not much like now [laughs]
The writing is good, and the author can draw character pictures, which is really a plus [admiration]. It's just that the new book has a little less words.
It's okay, there are no big logical mistakes at the moment. The character of the protagonist is also quite special and very distinct. But the shaping is not enough. When appropriate, the protagonist can be made to eat and hold back. If he is the joker for a few episodes, it is not surprising that he is Peter anyway.
I just like the protagonist's unyielding spirit [Admiration]
I hope there is a big cock. When Pete encounters it, his stats will automatically explode and then they will fight each other.
The current score is 79, not reaching the 8th turn, but the peak of the 7th turn. Be proud of the author, you are very strong.
There are some things that need to be told to everyone first. The person who makes weapons for the hero is male, but looks female. His personality is roughly that of an autistic homebody. I don't know if it will be accepted. I feel like it should be. Because the protagonist said a lot of ambiguous words. If you can accept that this book is pretty good at the moment, if you can't accept it, then... (Playing machine sound) 20 points
The plot is that the protagonist enters a game, which is very classic. The protagonist is a family dude and faces a military challenge at the beginning. The protagonist wins the challenge by finding someone to make magic fire guns, purchasing and finding props. Later, due to family problems, in order to solve the money problem, he accompanied his second daughter, the proud daughter, on an adventure. During the adventure, the male protagonist leads to a large dungeon through the contract elf. It hasn't been updated since.
The plot is reasonable, there are no mistakes so far, it is very smooth, and there are no embarrassing plots.
There are currently some flaws in the rationality of character behavior. The protagonist is a playboy, and his reputation in school is very bad. It can be said that he is responsible for all bad things. The pink-haired heroine at the beginning had a big conflict with the protagonist because she stood up for someone else, leading to a duel.
After the duel, the way the male protagonist and the pink-haired female protagonist get along can be said to be sympathetic, or just bickering. Slightly unreasonable.
There's nothing unreasonable about the other characters' interactions with each other. The plot between the hero and the daughter is good.
I think it looks pretty good here.
It can be said to be very exciting. Even a poor college student like me gave him more than 20 gifts.
The early writing is pretty good, and the plot is relatively reasonable. I can't find any faults at the moment. I'll add more comments later [laughs]
It seems very good at the moment, but the question is whether the male protagonist can be made more CS and more worthy of the surname Griffin.
Reading this book is more like a waste of time, and you can have some fun by the way🤓
As for the rating? I don't know, my national policy is very graceful
Okay, okay, there are illustrations [blowing kiss]
It looks good and deserves five stars [blowing kiss]
Taihao read it, these five words are really difficult to put together.
I like the male protagonist's character so much. Like Arthur in Dragon Clan
The author's painting skills are very good [laughs]
It looks very interesting so far, and I look forward to the follow-up development. The author has a lot of life and a lot of surfing.
It's so sad because I actually finished reading it. Can the author update a million words a day [laughs]
The author's writing is good and the quality is guaranteed. It's beautiful and I love reading it.
Not bad, I'm looking forward to the follow-up development
After reading more than a dozen chapters, the title of the book does not match the content. The protagonist travels into the world of the second game, has a conflict with the female protagonist, and then... The male protagonist starts to conquer the world of the second game? Take another look
Coming from Benjamin's book, I will support a wave of authors first [laughs][laughs]
Current thoughts: The genius swordsman girl Tokyo Arnold, Peter who was violated by the glory of humanity, the gravity-based weapon master and the cool girl, the tsundere villain Lucifer (
Are you sure the book cover was not generated by Griffin peterAI?
Good looking The main character has a mouth and is flirtatious from time to time (regardless of gender). His character is the best in the books I have read, and it will change. The most important thing is that the author's self-made character designs are very appropriate. Finally, I hope the author can update more at once and the quality is not much like now [laughs]
The writing is good, and the author can draw character pictures, which is really a plus [admiration]. It's just that the new book has a little less words.
It's okay, there are no big logical mistakes at the moment. The character of the protagonist is also quite special and very distinct. But the shaping is not enough. When appropriate, the protagonist can be made to eat and hold back. If he is the joker for a few episodes, it is not surprising that he is Peter anyway. I just like the protagonist's unyielding spirit [Admiration]
I hope there is a big cock. When Pete encounters it, his stats will automatically explode and then they will fight each other.
The current score is 79, not reaching the 8th turn, but the peak of the 7th turn. Be proud of the author, you are very strong. There are some things that need to be told to everyone first. The person who makes weapons for the hero is male, but looks female. His personality is roughly that of an autistic homebody. I don't know if it will be accepted. I feel like it should be. Because the protagonist said a lot of ambiguous words. If you can accept that this book is pretty good at the moment, if you can't accept it, then... (Playing machine sound) 20 points The plot is that the protagonist enters a game, which is very classic. The protagonist is a family dude and faces a military challenge at the beginning. The protagonist wins the challenge by finding someone to make magic fire guns, purchasing and finding props. Later, due to family problems, in order to solve the money problem, he accompanied his second daughter, the proud daughter, on an adventure. During the adventure, the male protagonist leads to a large dungeon through the contract elf. It hasn't been updated since. The plot is reasonable, there are no mistakes so far, it is very smooth, and there are no embarrassing plots. There are currently some flaws in the rationality of character behavior. The protagonist is a playboy, and his reputation in school is very bad. It can be said that he is responsible for all bad things. The pink-haired heroine at the beginning had a big conflict with the protagonist because she stood up for someone else, leading to a duel. After the duel, the way the male protagonist and the pink-haired female protagonist get along can be said to be sympathetic, or just bickering. Slightly unreasonable. There's nothing unreasonable about the other characters' interactions with each other. The plot between the hero and the daughter is good.
I think it looks pretty good here. It can be said to be very exciting. Even a poor college student like me gave him more than 20 gifts.
The early writing is pretty good, and the plot is relatively reasonable. I can't find any faults at the moment. I'll add more comments later [laughs]
It seems very good at the moment, but the question is whether the male protagonist can be made more CS and more worthy of the surname Griffin.
Reading this book is more like a waste of time, and you can have some fun by the way🤓 As for the rating? I don't know, my national policy is very graceful
Okay, okay, there are illustrations [blowing kiss]
It looks good and deserves five stars [blowing kiss]
Taihao read it, these five words are really difficult to put together.
I like the male protagonist's character so much. Like Arthur in Dragon Clan
The author's painting skills are very good [laughs]
It looks very interesting so far, and I look forward to the follow-up development. The author has a lot of life and a lot of surfing. It's so sad because I actually finished reading it. Can the author update a million words a day [laughs]
The author's writing is good and the quality is guaranteed. It's beautiful and I love reading it.
Not bad, I'm looking forward to the follow-up development
After reading more than a dozen chapters, the title of the book does not match the content. The protagonist travels into the world of the second game, has a conflict with the female protagonist, and then... The male protagonist starts to conquer the world of the second game? Take another look
Coming from Benjamin's book, I will support a wave of authors first [laughs][laughs]