The Machine God: Starting with a Hand-Built Anti-Materiel Rifle

It's okay, just an ordinary cool article, a classic template of plot-like spiritual energy recovery and urban superpowers. To be honest, I am a bit disappointed in the abilities. The protagonist has zero scientific research ability and no imagination. The weapons and AI are all dropped by killing monsters... To be honest, this kind of personality is not suitable for arranging this kind of ability. One of the great pleasures of this kind of subject is scientific research and imagination. Now the only pleasure is to grind monsters without brain.

It is recommended that you open boxes later and get some R&D-oriented things, such as intermediate or advanced boxes that can increase your understanding or something, otherwise it will be pointless to keep killing monsters without thinking.

The greatest pleasure of this kind of writing is the development of abilities. But not here.

The superpower is a good one, but the protagonist doesn't seem to know how to use it, and there's no development at all. It's just a gun.

A dick smell

The ability is good. The subject matter is also quite good. I just don't know how to write. Alien beasts and superpowers plus machinery. Three contents. I have no desire to read any more. The ability to add weapon technology will make it look better.

The subject matter is good. The protagonist in the author's novel doesn't know what he is doing. He keeps playing with guns and doesn't know how to develop super powers.