[Transmigration + interstellar + ABO + brainless power fantasy + crowd-pleaser + male-male romance]
Third-rate writer Su Luo dies unexpectedly and transmigrates from Blue Star to the interstellar world, becoming a resident of a garbage planet.
Deep in debt and unable to afford even nutrient solution, he can only search for ways to make money on an obsolete optical computer.
To his surprise, he discovers that entertainment options here are few and far between.
In that case, why not give them something exciting?
In his previous life, he wrote short dramas for Yangshi. In this life, he picks up his old trade, rolls up his sleeves, and gets to work!
What about “The Domineering Commander Falls for Me, the Janitor,” “My Flash-Married Partner Is the Richest in the Galaxy,” and “Four Babies at Once: The Sterile Major General’s Spoiled Darling”...?
At first, the online reviews are scathing:
“Painful to watch!”
“What kind of nonsense is this?”
“How can just anyone make a drama now?”
Then:
“I’m hooked!”
“Why is it over already?!”
“Please update, aaaaaah!”
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Everyone knows that ever since the battle against the Zerg, General Peien has been unconscious from his injuries and has yet to wake up.
One day, the servant caring for him plays the latest hit short drama on a phone and is astonished to see General Peien’s toe move!
Could this actually help with the general’s treatment?
Upon hearing the good news, everyone agrees to play short dramas for General Peien every day.
Peien, forced to listen and so embarrassed he wants the floor to swallow him, but unable to speak: “...”
Will someone speak up for him?!
Don't be so detailed about the drama within the drama. Just write down clearly the turning point of the drama within the drama. If the drama within the drama is not exciting, it will only make people feel irritated and skip the text. It is better to only show the necessary scenes to cover up the shortcomings and the audience will know where the flaws are. To be honest, the two modern ones are quite good. The one may be more suitable for writing modern and emotional novels, but the plot-oriented one seems to be less well grasped by you.
Teacher, your works are very beautiful! I like it very much