One Piece: The Black-Winged Demon of the Old Era!
海贼：旧时代的黑翼大魔！
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 308k Words
- Genre
- Unknown
- Subgenre
- Unknown
- Updated
- 7d ago
- Source
- Fanqie
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95Chapters
4.5kReads
143Shelves
363Listens
70.3kReads · all time
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I haven't written a book in a long time and it's a bit boring. I want to read some Pirates fan fiction, but I still haven't found the one I like, so I'll start another one myself. The information was also checked online. If there is anything wrong, you are welcome to point it out. Let me give it five stars first.
The emotional experience is very rich, and the things that happened during the growth process are directly shown, and the protagonist's character is clearly portrayed. There is a very prominent highlight. The protagonist has always been looking for "heart" from the beginning to the present. This center makes people like it more and more as they watch. The battle is also well portrayed, but I feel that the protagonist can be strengthened later. I didn't say that before. Can this world save him? It feels like the protagonist can awaken the overlord color on the way to find his heart. For example, when he meets Xia Qi later, he understands his heart and awakens the high-level overlord color entanglement [Thinking] After all, the original Kirby directly awakens the entanglement [laughing] It is normal for the protagonist to also directly awaken [thinking]
The plot and creativity are very good, but I don't like the protagonist's character and behavior a bit. Alabasta was a bit like a nanny before, removing obstacles for Luffy. I also felt that the protagonist was very strong but anyone could jump in and punch him in the face. The protagonist doesn't care yet. Also, the protagonist's attacks were either misses or scrapes, and he never killed anyone. Please wait for the follow-up and see how it will be written later (I hope we don't create a pirate-navy alliance to resist world conquest [smile])
I seem to have seen a similar one
Very impressive, the author will post pictures of the characters below [love] [love] [love] [like] [like] [like]
Very well written
There is no need to say more about the ramming within the ramming.
It's okay, I personally like it better
It's okay, I'm too lazy to look at it later.
There was too much interaction with the Straw Hat protagonist group in the early stage