Honkai: Star Rail: Abandoned, Then Cultivating Immortality and Overpowering the Aeons

I would like to give you a small suggestion. There is a bit too much plot in the original work. It is more fun to write this kind of diary exposure article with a little more fun. Or, if you reduce the plot of the original work, you can write about the intensity of cultivating immortals and powerful people, such as Emperor Huangtian, Emperor Yan, and Ruthless Emperor. It can also be about things like the Human Empress, or things about the world of immortality, and the main character writes in a serious way, as if he knows that his diary will be seen by others. In addition, the main character can also be asked to do things, or break knives.

The content is quite interesting, so it's a good choice to take a look at it in your spare time. It just feels like the relationship with the heroine is progressing a little too fast. Of course, this is just my personal opinion. After all, I am not the author. He can write his book however he wants.

It feels very familiar, I felt like I was flying when I saw it, but I remember that the book was out of date

It looks good. They believe it. They really believe it.

It's very interesting. Please update it more. 😊

Let's use some mortal skills, such as Xuan Yin Jue and Qing Yuan Sword Technique. These are all very useful. Otherwise, those moves are meaningless [laughter]

Author, one page is missing, chapter 34 has not been released.

Didn't the author say that there will be an update? Why don't you just update it?

Very well written, please update soon

Why is the author's name for Esta always wrong?