[Xuanhuan] [Decisive and Ruthless] [Manifestation] [Slaying Demons]
This one is on the longer side. You can skip ahead to Chapter 45, or not.
In the final years of the Great Qian Dynasty, the gods and Buddhas would not save people. They only devoured them.
The cycle of reincarnation was collapsing, and a thousand ghosts roamed the night. The court established the "Great Sacrifice," treating the people of one city after another like livestock and offering them to false gods from beyond the heavens in exchange for their lives. Ten years later would come the Boundless Great Sacrifice, when reincarnation would collapse completely.
The great cultivators of the court knelt in droves. Not one dared to utter a word of dissent.
But Chu Yuan, a young constable in Qingxi County, refused to kneel.
In his mind was a panel no one else could see:
A grateful word from a commoner was a Wish.
An incense stick offered at a temple was a Wish.
Even the blood shed while slaying demons was a Wish.
With the power of Wishes, he could manifest divine arts, magical treasures, pills, and inheritances from the Myriad Worlds with a single thought, bringing them all into this realm!
Others could cultivate bitterly for a hundred years without reaching the threshold. He could split open the heavens above the nine mortal realms with a single slash.
If demons wanted to eat people, he would slay demons.
If gods demanded sacrifices, he would kill gods.
That day, at the walls of Luojing, an army of a hundred thousand, both righteous and wicked, surrounded him. He kept one hand tucked in his sleeve and flicked the other. Lightning filled the sky and shattered the firmament.
"Everyone who has eaten people, spit them out."
The Thunder of the Nine Heavens surges forth as one breath, its execution strikes terrifying ten thousand ghosts. When the Thunder Venerable attains the Dao, a flick of his fingers will shatter every star in the sky!
So far, Chu Yuan's character is quite stable, calm and decisive, but the plot develops a bit too fast? The logic is a little bit unclear, but it's okay. Would you recommend adding more descriptions of facial expressions? And has the author noticed that you like to use the same word very much? It would feel weird if you read a chapter several times. Others are pretty good, I like them very much, cheers for the author, and hope to keep updating them. From now on, if you become popular, I will become an old fan and I will sign it!!! 😄😄😄
The writing is good, the structure is complete, and it's a good way to pass the time.
Personally, I think it looks very good, and the character creation is okay, so go for it, author!
The future is bright, platinum. 😘