Luo Xiaohei: the First Disciple of Wireless, the Orange Cat Has Arrived

Since it was written earlier that Jin Yu controlled metal for revenge (but you didn't write that Jin Yu knew she could control metal, but only learned about it after the village was massacred), it feels a bit ummm to detail the scene where she felt the metal later, or you should not write about the village being massacred by the troll.

The plot is warm and bland

I like [admiration] very much

The first part is super good, but there is a section in the back that makes me feel that I have suddenly lost my charm, lost interest, and is a bit boring, so I gave up now and will read it again next time when I am short of books. I feel so uncomfortable, why is this happening? I watched it a little bit later and then stopped watching it. Editor 2: Let's talk about why it's so frustrating (there are spoilers) The early stage is very interesting, and there is nothing to say. Later, the protagonist for the sake of Infinite (because Infinite later went to Laojun's ectoplasmic space to save Qing Ning after a period of time to input spiritual power) gave up the domain and the memory of the previous life and the opportunity to become an immortal, and merged the domain with Laojun's ectoplasm space (I remember it). But it should be restored later, because it is said that as long as there are gods in the space system, they should be able to recover, and Infinite becomes a god later on, but I haven't read it later, so I won't talk about it. Maybe it's because I have a lot of emotions involved, and I've seen less of this kind of fanfic, so I don't feel comfortable with it. Personal understanding, if you don't like it, don't spray it If the author hates it, I can delete it