I Set Up a Stall Selling Wraps in Horror Dungeons

I just finished reading the first dungeon and couldn't help but comment, it's amazing, it feels a bit like watching JJ, but there are too many male characters in the dungeon, so I'll deduct one star. The emotional writing is great, please read the latest chapter before reviewing

When I first saw the title of this book, I thought it was about traveling to a famine-stricken world to sell food. But I have read the same type of novels too many times, so I never clicked on them. It wasn't until I was in a bit of a book slump recently that I discovered that it was different from what I imagined. The heroine is not just selling food, she is exploring the dungeon background like participating in a weird dungeon and getting out of the dungeon alive. I like to read this kind of weird survival novel, especially the author's writing is very good. The characters in the copy are not like NPCs, but like real people. So after reading the first copy, I couldn't wait to give the author good reviews. Thank you for writing, I will work hard to update it!! [Bookshelf plus one]

I've only read Chapter 31, and I couldn't help but comment and give the author a response. What I also like about this protagonist is that she is smart, calm, able to accept and control emotions. In just thirty-one chapters, she is like a hill, very stable. Every time the wind blows, it adds an inch of soil and a grain of sand to her. Every time it rains, I can predict that it will make the hill more solid and solid. This is my first impression of this protagonist so far. Then there are words for the author. Even though this book has not been seen by many people, it is the first book. It has not been long since it started. Take your time. Some people will make suggestions, but I hope that the author will accept the suggestions while sticking to his own thinking and rhythm, and not letting it become weird. Come on, author, if I tie it, I will recommend it and help others.

It's good to watch, but there are spoilers. The author's description method is that everyone has a story line, and then only half of the words are spoken (this makes me feel like I am a fool for jumping from one sentence to another, maybe leaving a blank space, ) has a very suspenseful feeling (why did Zhou Yue go to save the orchid grass and then disappear into ashes? Was it because he was kind? That's good), and then why there are so many male characters. The protagonist is very good, but I still want to see more stories about female characters (I guess the author didn't see this),

Overall, I feel good. This kind of setting has no cp. The heroine is also firm in her rationality and has a kind heart to help others. I like it very much. However, in terms of the overall writing style and wording, I felt that it was too calm as a whole. If I imagined it as a film and television, I would think it was black and white, quiet, and without any vitality. Then the author likes to use words such as "for a long time", "very slowly" and "... So quiet...". For example, ×× looked at it for a long time, ×× stood for a long time, ×× was very slow, ×× was so quiet as ××. Click to search the full text. These words appeared many times at least in the first copy, which further deepened the feeling of death. I think it's okay to write in moderation, which can create a sense of sadness and horror, but too much makes it feel lifeless. Novels can still be more alive.

Maybe I don't like the Republic of China very much, but the story is okay and the logic is smooth. Did you use some AI assistance? It's impossible to write the word "horror set" purely manually, right?

Five-star praise. There is no female competition. The author's writing style is very good. It is very real and delicate. I am very impetuous and rarely read the book in its entirety. The copy is very logical and not AI. After reading each copy, I suddenly understood. The narrative is very delicate. The name of the copy echoes the content of the copy. I praise this detail. I rarely give book reviews. I like the author. I like your story very much.

It's been a long time since I've seen such a wonderful infinite flow. The righteous guy who blocked the third dungeon and died didn't explain it. I didn't understand why he blocked it. Also, those who sell umbrellas and enter the dungeon should also write down a little bit about their participation. Otherwise, they always thought it was a single-player dungeon. I hope it gets better and better. Anyway, it's very exciting. Come on.

I haven't seen such a well-written copy in a long time! It's so natural and every character is so vivid! The way to pass the dungeon is also very special. Lin Wu's character really pokes me! I am even more looking forward to the unfolding of the worldview. I hope that other people who enter the dungeon in the future can also draw more characters and interact more.

The idea is good, it is a brain-burning infinite flow. If it is not scary in the popular sense, it is basically based on the human heart. There are more people killed in the battle, and the resistance is not strong. I hope the heroine can slowly grow up to master the strength of the thing that crushes the devil and kills with ashes. The author is more lively and willing to listen to opinions and likes.