Detective Conan: Momiji Ooka Chased Me to Tokyo from the Start

The rare Hongye heroine is well written, but the love routine is a little lacking. If it can be added a little more, the look and feel will be better. The transition between each case is too blunt, and some transition plots can be added in the middle. Then when the protagonist inserts himself into some events, the reasons are too abrupt. Well, for example, in the case of the building explosion, the frequency of the cases can be reduced a little, and more daily love affairs with Hongye can be interspersed. Otherwise, it will feel like the protagonist has always been with Xiaolan and the others. These are the parts that I felt uncomfortable when I watched it. Finally, I hope the author can keep writing 💕

A rare single heroine with red leaves, very beautiful [I learned it] [I learned it] I hope it can be updated until the end [Attention] [Attention]

I really feel that in the original plot, Ran, Ye and Momiji are standing together, Heiji and Conan. When looking down from above, I really feel that it would be great if Kujo is there. Ran has Conan and Ye has Heiji. Momiji is not too uncomfortable (although everyone is talking about the butler CP, but I really feel that it is better to be of the same age). The author's film just makes up for this shortcoming. I thought to myself, it would be great if there was Kujo in the original version. Everyone has their own significant other (Old thief Aoyama is so hateful, Momiji Xiaoai Hongzi, the three girls each have their own charm, but they have to compete... Ugh) Now the latest chapter of the official anime, the way Momiji cried is really uncomfortable. In the world where Kujo is not around, Momiji fell in love with the wrong person. I really hope that Kujo really exists. I can only say thank you to the author for adding regrets. I hope the updates will not be discontinued. I will always support you. Hongye needs Kujo to accompany her. I treat it as a parallel universe. I think this world line must exist.

I have read about a dozen chapters and I feel that overall it is okay. The writing is decent and the pace is fast. The main problem with the abrupt transition of the case is that Conan's case is relatively independent. Therefore, in fan fiction, the need to string together the cases is a test of the author's skills. Without the lazy writing method of system issuing tasks, it is even more necessary for the author to arrange the protagonist's purpose and behavior reasonably and logically. In fact, this aspect needs to be strengthened... The writing of Hongye is quite vivid and interesting, and most of the famous characters are consistent with the original work. On the contrary, the protagonist's image is not established, and it is difficult to clearly describe his personality. I don't know why sometimes the few comments about psychological activities give me a sense of violation ( But I really like that the author did not force all the highlights to the protagonist. For example, the words of Mouri Kogoro in Moon Shadow Island are very consistent with the character and highlight the charm. When I saw that, I added the book to the bookshelf and wanted to continue reading the following content. I hope to continue to update ~

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Four Star Encouragement When I saw the single heroine Ooka Momiji coming in, I thought it was mostly daily and less cases.

It's well written. At first I thought it was the kind where all the regrets are filled in by Invincible. But it turned out that it was pretty good. It would be meaningless if it was filled in completely. Come on, author, don't stop updating.

It's okay. I've read many novels where the heroine is Haibara Ai. This one is quite interesting. Then the protagonist keeps saying that he doesn't want to participate in the case, but still gets involved. I think it may be because the protagonist wants to protect his friends and family. The murder of Prosecutor Kujo was a turning point. I feel that after this time, the protagonist has a clearer protective heart. However, some details and emotional lines are still not very good. Overall, it is quite good.

I think it's okay, the writing is okay, and various plot modifications are online. I don't know why the score is low. I feel it is better than many 9-point fanfics. My personal score should be 9.0.

This is my first time watching the heroine of Red Leaves. I feel very good watching it so far. More, more, more