Traveling through the elf world for fifteen years, he started out as the son of the King of Heaven, holding a championship-level dragon. Others are still leveling up in the Novice Village, but I have awakened the god-level system. With the power of detection eyes and waveguides, he even dared to take the stone tablet of Arceus. Don't ask me why I'm not the champion, because my goal is to collect all the first-level mythical beasts as pets!
Reader comments
I give you 5 stars, but that doesn't mean you have the strength of 5 stars.
I've read the first part of your book, and I already know the plot behind it. Either you change the map, or you end it with more than 200 chapters.
It was okay to write exciting articles like yours in the past, but to be honest, now, there is no desire for people to read it. The three golden chapters have no spark, no hooks, and no contradictions. So how do you want readers to read it? Is it fun to watch you sign in later? Forget it, your writing is not very good either.
But if you comment too much, Shennong will no longer be interested.
Levels get messed up at every turn, AI is a no-brainer
I give you 5 stars, but that doesn't mean you have the strength of 5 stars. I've read the first part of your book, and I already know the plot behind it. Either you change the map, or you end it with more than 200 chapters. It was okay to write exciting articles like yours in the past, but to be honest, now, there is no desire for people to read it. The three golden chapters have no spark, no hooks, and no contradictions. So how do you want readers to read it? Is it fun to watch you sign in later? Forget it, your writing is not very good either. But if you comment too much, Shennong will no longer be interested.
Levels get messed up at every turn, AI is a no-brainer