[Pokemon] + [satire] + [no System] + [slow-paced] + [epic-length]
After I transmigrated, was my Gastly a Jinchuriki for Giratina?
I stayed up all night hunting for a Shiny Gastly. When I opened my eyes, I had really transmigrated.
Other people got a Starter Pokémon from the starter trio. Mine was a blue-flame Gastly marked “Abnormal” by the System.
It couldn’t speak. All it could do was draw stars.
A crooked one meant “I’ve been waiting for you.” A cracked one meant “Run!”
Two students transmigrated at the same time. One joined the League and climbed the ranks, while the other refused to be recruited and set out to uncover the truth.
The brothers went their separate ways, and the team fell apart.
A sealing array lay hidden beneath the school, while something even bigger slept beneath the city. The authorities said everything was fine, the news blamed magnetic anomalies, and the League said, “Welcome aboard.”
When the Ghost King drew the first five-pointed star on Bao Xingyu’s palm, he still had no idea that the blue flame the world had scorned would one day burn all the way to Giratina.
The Key of Shadow and the Key of Light.
Those overlooked by the light kindled an impossible flame in the shadows.
The world called the blue flame an “anomaly.”
But in the end, the anomaly saved everyone.
Because I am also a writer, I say I give you 5 stars, but to be honest, your book does not deserve 5 stars. The biggest problem with the introduction is that it is a very large one, but to be honest, picky readers will not read your text at all. Your introduction will dissuade a large number of readers. You can check other people's introductions, and there is no need to add the last sentence. If you add it, it will make it even weirder. Then there is the poison point. I have now read 6 chapters with 4 poisons, and 5 without Pokémon does not count. To be honest, I didn't have the desire to read your article. It has no hook and is not very exciting. There is nothing in the three golden chapters that can attract others, but there is no poisonous plot in the three chapters. This is okay. Then there are the adjectives. To be honest, your description is a bit weak. It's not something that people can remember at a glance. I can see that you wrote group portraits, but I think you should have the characters appear one by one. You have three characters in four pictures. It's a bit like the underworld. I'll change it slowly later, I think your setting is okay.