Wang Yang brings an ancient Eastern qi cultivation art with him when he transmigrates to the American horror world of 1994. He discovers that killing vengeful spirits and other supernatural creatures can speed up his breakthroughs.
From then on, he travels across America, dealing with one bizarre supernatural incident after another.
A ferryman possessing an ancient coin, a female ghost weeping by the river, an undead killer wandering about, and a witch who sold her soul to a demon.
Behind each strange tale lurks the malice leaking through from other dimensions.
When the gates between worlds swing wide open, the terrors of legend are poised to engulf the human world.
Eastern qi cultivation faces Western ghost stories, protecting a corner of the real world.
Multiple heroines. If that’s not your thing, don’t read!!!!!!!!!
Friends leaving bad reviews, please go easy on me. Give it three stars at least. A He thanks you in advance!!!!!!
(Note: All stories, locations, and characters in this book are fictional. Do not confuse them with reality.)
So far, I see a lot of shortcomings, but it's still okay. For example, there is no need to forcefully join this organization to agree with them. Secondly, the setting of Qi Refining is to guide the Qi of the Five Elements to open acupoints and then practice magical powers. However, one problem is that these magical powers are only pure magical powers without magic knowledge. Practicing Qi does not improve life. I see that most of them are cultivating sex without cultivating life. Generally speaking, it is biased towards orthodox and incomplete orthodoxy.
The story is rich, the characters are well described, and the plot has ups and downs. Can't put it down 🤤 🤤 🤤 🤤 🤤 🤤 🤤 🤤 🤤 🤤 🤤 🤤 🤤 🤤 🤤 🤤 🤤 🤤 🤤 🤤 🤤 🤤 🤤 🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤
First of all, I don't think there is anything wrong with participating in an official organization, because he has great advantages in terms of the rights he has to obtain information. I think it's okay for the author to absorb opinions, but I prefer that the author absorbs logical loopholes rather than absorbing readers' requirements for the plot. A very simple example, there are some people on the author's gift list, but the number of comments in the book review area is far less than this number. This means that a considerable number of people who read books seriously are unwilling to comment, just like I am tired of typing so many words now. And if the author absorbs the opinions of some vocal readers about the plot, it is easy to lose those who read the book seriously but are unwilling to speak out. This is also the reason why there are fewer and fewer people who have good reviews for many books. Because the people who don't like to speak out are gone, and the remaining people are only dissatisfied with the author's plot. He will leave, and the author's plot cannot satisfy everyone. Author, if your plot has an outline and is not too affected by comments, I believe most people will tolerate it for a while even if they don't like the plot. But what if your plot is affected by the comment area? I don't know if other people can stand it, but I definitely can't stand it anyway, because it means that the novels I like to read have to be controlled by others, and once I am out of control, I have to spend a lot of energy in the comment area. This will undoubtedly affect my reading experience of the novel. In another novel, the comment section was full of comments about the protagonist having no CP. If the protagonist had CP, he would start scolding the protagonist. Then the author held a poll, and the vote of those with CP was much higher than that of those without CP. It must be three times as high as him. The fundamental reason is not that readers are duplicitous, but that everyone is too lazy to comment, but it is still okay to vote casually. I have to add that the plot-related things I am talking about refer to things that will affect the specific direction of the plot, such as whether a certain character lives or dies, and whether the protagonist will do this or that in the future. The completion of the world view and the completion of the setting are not in this category. This belongs to the supplementary logic aspect.
The author can add some angels. For example, angels generally do not really come to the world. They can come in the form of nuns. All genders are female. After all, angels do not stipulate the gender strength setting of men and women. You can decide the strength of the angels based on the compatibility of the nuns. Don't write the angels too weak. After all, Michael is not even afraid of the Lord of Hell. Don't write angels like those bad people. After all, angels themselves are not bad people.
I've read five chapters and I'd like to give you four stars to encourage you.
I will read your friends' opinions and ideas, and I will continue to improve and write this book as well as possible. Thank you again for your support. I will also try to avoid other poisonous points, so you can rest assured to follow up.
The setting is very good, the story is compact, very good
The National Day is over and there is no update yet
Good job author
Good book,,,,, it really works!!! 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂